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I met you by a waterfall so late one afternoonTelling our stories about ourselves
And how we longed to live on the moon
Rock star dreaming, sunshine burning us through our clothes
I took a dive off the edge that day
Into the emptiness, only unrequited love knows
To taste your lips just one last time
Wouldn’t be enough, just say you’ll be mine
I’m tired of trying, I’m tired of lying when I say
I don’t love you anymore
I count my blessings, like you tell me I should
Watch the rain poor through the window
And I wish I could
Be with you, wherever you are right now
It’s been so long since I saw you last
But I’ll make it through somehow
Childish dreaming, rain streaming through my clothes
I took a dive off the edge that day
Into the emptiness, only unrequited love knows
To taste your lips just one last time
Wouldn’t be enough, just say you’ll be mine
I’m tired of trying, I’m tired of lying when I say
I don’t love you anymore
Here’s to rooftops that shatter when I cry, and call out your name
No one wins this fight, no time for blame
I’m sick and tired, of this game
I met you that day, At the waterfall
Took a dive off the edge
Into something unknown
So taste my lips, Say it won’t be the last time
Just say you’ll be mine
I’m tired of trying, So damn tired of lying, when I say
I don’t love you anymore
I won’t ever say, I don’t love you anymore
(Don’t let me lie and say, I don’t love you anymore)
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Comments: 13
Sijuki [2006-06-21 21:26:25 +0000 UTC]
Very true... so true.
"To taste your lips just one last time
Wouldn’t be enough, just say you’ll be mine
I’m tired of trying, I’m tired of lying when I say
I don’t love you anymore"
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MemoryFinder In reply to rwirtz [2006-02-26 11:20:29 +0000 UTC]
???? lol thank you... I so don't understand!!
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MemoryFinder In reply to rwirtz [2006-02-26 20:42:03 +0000 UTC]
your comment... i think the jeeze and uhm threw me off.... it just didn't sound like you? Does that make sense? lol I don't know... i was tired.
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rwirtz In reply to MemoryFinder [2006-02-26 21:05:25 +0000 UTC]
Well, I was well, uhm, taken aback by the quality of this piece, like, it's brilliant and stuff, jeez
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tappergurl [2006-02-26 06:01:15 +0000 UTC]
- Everytime I read your writing, I die inside and fall in love with it a little bit more. ^_^ I wish I had half the talent that you have.
- "Here’s to rooftops that shatter when I cry, and call out your name
No one wins this fight, no time for blame
I’m sick and tired, of this game
I met you that day, At the waterfall
Took a dive off the edge
Into something unknown" - My favorite lines.
- Took a nice twist at the end.
- My title suggestion would be: Forever Real
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MemoryFinder In reply to tappergurl [2006-02-26 06:06:42 +0000 UTC]
Oooooohhhh that is a kickass title. I SO suck with titles... half the time, I end up just naming them with whatever the date is... oi. ha.
And thank you soo incredibly much. That is so sweet of you to say!
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tappergurl In reply to MemoryFinder [2006-02-26 06:09:27 +0000 UTC]
- Thank you, I'm honored and pleased you liked it. ^_^
- You're welcome.
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