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Published: 2005-11-26 08:09:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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I took a walk todaylike we used to in the rain
Thinking about the old days
Promises and Mood Rings
God, things are really changing
but you were never here
Do you remember midnight talks-
that ended in moonlit walks?
I don’t want to remember
But I know I’ll never-
I know we’ll never…
(Three shots, I’ll forget your name
Three more, and it’s all the same
A great big blur in my memory
Why did you mean so much to me?)
I stare outside my windows
Remembering pillows
Upon which we would lay
Yeah, way back in the day
We’re scripted to fall apart
and on cue, we always do
Curtains I try to peak through
Walls built between me and you
Carefully constructed so
You’ll never know me at all
Do you remember the drive-
to the castle late that night?
(Four more blue pills down the drain
Four more white ones drown the pain
A great big blur in my memory
For now you mean nothing to me)
I don’t want to remember
But I know I’ll never-
I know we’ll never…
I remember we built ourselves to break
I remember we built ourselves like earthquakes
To rip and fall apart at endings
Before beginnings ever had a chance
Do you think that we
Could be more than movie scenes
So successfully scripted to build up
And then fall apart on cue
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Comments: 19
puwen [2005-12-04 05:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Very beautifully written. Your rhyming here is, of course, first-rate. Again!
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Sijuki [2005-11-29 16:00:39 +0000 UTC]
the drive to the castle? is that a white castle? mmmmm... sliders. wait... nevermind you wouldn't go to White Castle. I don't even think there are White Castle's in Cali...
ummm... good writing... very descriptive... I like.
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MemoryFinder In reply to Sijuki [2005-11-29 19:31:30 +0000 UTC]
white castle... im suddenly confused.
no it was to hearst ( i bet i didnt spell that right) castle.
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Sijuki In reply to MemoryFinder [2005-11-29 23:25:19 +0000 UTC]
You made a comment about driving to the castle... White Castle is a hamburger chain. They make little hamburgers like 2"x2" and are loved by drunk people usually. They are referred to as sliders because they are known to slide down your throat and slide right through your system. But then I realized you probably wouldn't be going to White Castle since you don't eat meat. (and they don't have salads). Didn't you ever see Harold & Kumar go to White Castle? They are similar to Krystals if you have those out there.
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MemoryFinder In reply to Sijuki [2005-11-30 02:22:06 +0000 UTC]
we don't have either one here. lol
yes im still on my no meat kick. (cept i caved for turkey on thanksgiving day.... god i love turkey)
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Sijuki In reply to MemoryFinder [2005-11-30 05:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Awww... I am telling that you ate the poor turkey. *gobble gobble*... here turkey turkey... I got some gravy for you... mmmmm....
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MemoryFinder In reply to Sijuki [2005-11-30 17:57:13 +0000 UTC]
gravy is gross. i also hate stuffing. remember that when i crash at your place next thanksgiving.
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Sijuki In reply to MemoryFinder [2005-12-01 05:13:33 +0000 UTC]
you know girl... you are being really difficult. You need to learn to like gravy, stuffing, and jello, and everything else... YOU WILL LIKE IT DAMNIT! But I still love ya..
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MemoryFinder In reply to Sijuki [2005-12-01 05:40:52 +0000 UTC]
okay. EW! all those things are EWW! except jello- cause you can take the mix and mix it with cottage cheese and thats yummy. but the rest.. is EW!
lol
of course you love me.
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Sijuki In reply to MemoryFinder [2005-12-01 22:30:36 +0000 UTC]
You are starting to get a little ewww... putting jello in cottage cheese? are you damned insane? Girl you need an adjustment.
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MemoryFinder In reply to Sijuki [2005-12-02 01:46:53 +0000 UTC]
dont knock it til you try it
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Sijuki In reply to MemoryFinder [2005-12-02 16:12:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh have no fear I will knock it... If you don't eat my stuffing.. I am not eating your cottage jello.
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Iggyofdarune [2005-11-28 05:25:38 +0000 UTC]
Descriptive.
The change from three shots, to four pills was in my mind, a very good transition.
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MemoryFinder In reply to Iggyofdarune [2005-11-28 05:26:52 +0000 UTC]
i havent seen a comment from you in...like.. years..dude!
thanks.
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Iggyofdarune In reply to MemoryFinder [2005-11-28 05:27:27 +0000 UTC]
Im like a green beret. I dissapear. And then I say stupid things like, "Im like a green beret." *nods*
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MemoryFinder In reply to Iggyofdarune [2005-11-28 05:48:36 +0000 UTC]
aww well its still good to..."see" ya
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Iggyofdarune In reply to MemoryFinder [2005-11-28 17:55:39 +0000 UTC]
Because I am teh awsome? S'good ta "see" you too. Mmm, Quotations.
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rwirtz [2005-11-26 17:27:41 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. Quite a good description of a dysfunctional relationship (of any kind). I like how you've changed the chorus to fit with the build-up of the song.
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