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Published: 2011-10-24 21:04:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Awaken.

I rouse, gasping and sputtering as I inhale.  A cloud of dank, earthen litter fills my nose and lungs, cloying and musty.  A fit of coughing racks my body as I roll to my back.  Staring up into night's dark canopy, a shroud of leaves obliterates the stars of heaven.  Where am I?  I raise my leaden, pounding head from a pillow of decomposing leaves and peer into the surroundings, more darkness.  How did I get here?

Stumbling to my feet, hands extended, I search my way through tangled briar and towering trunks.  Roots snatch at my feet as branches claw my face.

This darkened forest harbors a sinister evil.  I can feel it, sense it.  The wind's soft rustle carries a muted, ominous voice, compelling… demanding!

Come?

Fear twists my gut and bile rises at the back of my throat.  The thumping of my heart fills my ears in a deafening crescendo. I must escape.

I run!  Leaves crunch beneath my stride.  Reckless, stumbling, I crash into pillared trunks.  Scrambling back to my feet I continue this mad, blind dash.

I try to get away.

A hint of starlight steals past the forest's sheltering ceiling.  The trees become less crowded, opening on a small clearing.

Closer, come closer.

Somehow my flight has only tricked my footsteps into blundering onto this foul unwanted visitation.  Foolish of me to think I could escape.

A lone tombstone juts from the ground, ancient leaning as if ready to topple.  No vines, no overgrowth flourishes anywhere near it.  They fear it, I think.

My legs betray me, and I curse the tread of my footfall as I circle around it.  I can sense its hunger.

There is no name, no epitaph carved into the marble.  Though it is blank, I stare with shock and revulsion.  I sense its restlessness.  I know enough to be scared.

Touch!

I attempt to stagger backward but find my motion carrying forward.  Against my own volition, my hand reaches out.  A cold iciness chills my bones as the pattern of marble swirls.  The writhing surface recesses with a name and date, Tom Baker, 1807.  The words barely burn in my thoughts when the maelstrom returns and it carves a new name and date into its face.  The inscriptions churn onward with quickening pace, marching forward in time, closer, ever closer.

A name, a date… it's today's date, if my recollection serves me correct.  Now, I know what it wants, what it demands.  I watch as my hands turn an ashen gray, my skin cold to touch.  Wings sprout at my back, and trembling fingers reach up to feel a grotesque mask, fanged and horned.  With a flap of wings, the gargoyle that is I, perches atop the stone.

Bring him.

Jim Sanders… that is his name.  He camps at the edge of this very forest.  I don't know how I know this, but I do.

Bring him.

My terror is greater now, remorseful, reluctant.  My voice is hard and unrecognizable.  "As master commands."  With a powerful stoke of my wings I launch into the heavens.
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Comments: 4

Tusenord [2012-01-17 20:26:57 +0000 UTC]

Very eloquent writing, which would fit an ancient creature like a gargoyle - can't be anything but poetic if you sit and watch the world and time pass, right? It's a very gothic setting and I LOVE seeing another type of monster than the over-done vampires and werewolves (and worst of all, other were-things).

I had the impression that the narrator knew what was going on so I got annoyed that s/he was keeping it from me as a reader just for tension, but if he's not supposed to know himself (or herself) then it makes perfect sense.

Great ending, and throughout most of the story you've managed to keep a very clear and easy-to-read language despite the lovely phrasings. Delicate balance that, and which pays off in pulling the story forwards despite the lack of blood and gore

And I'm so going to have a gargoyle on my tombstone.

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memoryshift In reply to Tusenord [2012-01-21 20:19:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

The narrator didn't know what was going on. I was just tapping into those feeling of dread, where you know something is wrong, but you don't know exactly what is hanging so darkly over your thoughts. Being the eternal worry-wart, those feeling come second nature to me.

I've always liked gargoyles. Something you don't get to see in American architecture too often. I do own my own little garden gargoyle, though.

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Methemac [2011-10-30 23:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice job, eloquent writing

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memoryshift In reply to Methemac [2011-10-31 00:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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