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Well, I believe this'll be the last page of Chapter 2 -better stop so that we don't end up with page 13 as the final, could be bad... At first I though about making it a little longer, but then...well, I did kind of reach my goals of this chapter, althugh it isn't very concentrated on anything in particular:

*Deepen the relationship between Ariel and Demyx
*Involve Axel more, reveal Demyx's secret to him
*Introduce the current Organization XIII-members, Ariel's family, Urchin and Thor
*Throw in the main antagonist

So I got something done, though it didn't feel like it
This page looks better to me than most of the latest ones-a bit unhappy with Ursula's face in the first panel, but otherwise happy

...And sea cucumbers are possibly the most disgusting animals I've ever read about.

Chapter 3 cover: [link]

Description
Well, I believe this'll be the last page of Chapter 2 -better stop so that we don't end up with page 13 as the final, could be bad... At first I though about making it a little longer, but then...well, I did kind of reach my goals of this chapter, althugh it isn't very concentrated on anything in particular:

*Deepen the relationship between Ariel and Demyx
*Involve Axel more, reveal Demyx's secret to him
*Introduce the current Organization XIII-members, Ariel's family, Urchin and Thor
*Throw in the main antagonist

So I got something done, though it didn't feel like it
This page looks better to me than most of the latest ones-a bit unhappy with Ursula's face in the first panel, but otherwise happy

...And sea cucumbers are possibly the most disgusting animals I've ever read about.

Chapter 3 cover: [link]