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MephistaTheDark β [MMDxUT] The Soul of Tenacity (Story/RP starter)
Published: 2018-08-23 12:57:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 660; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 4
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The girl kept her hands folded together, slowly moving them to her mouth to stop herself from screaming. But soon, her fear turned into terror. From this terror, she managed to draw more and more of her own, hidden magic energy. Betty's bright pink eyes quickly searched around to look for something to use as a weapon. She found nothing. As she looked back, a blast of magic rushed towards her and she let out a terrified yell, waiting for the impact to kill her. Nothing happened. She opened her eyes, looked at her faintly glowing hair. She knew, her hair would always turn more pink if she felt scared, but this never happened before. Holding strings of her light pink, faintly glowing hair between her thumb and index finger, she was confused and surprised. Amazed even. "What is this...?" A dark voice suddenly spoke to her. "So... This is what fear does to you... It lets you use your true powers... Interesting... For a measly human child, that is." Betty's soul, a Soul of Tenacity, glowed ever so brightly, as a determined expression filled her face. She used her feeling of fear to use her real magic. In her hands, she summoned a pink scythe. The voice laughed at her, before it created a form resembling Betty to fight her head-on. "It seems you are unaware... But pink is MY color." Betty boasted, swinging the scythe over her shoulder, ready to strike.Mephy's procrastinating way too often! x_x Anyway. I added a new slider to Betty's model, next to the tips of her hair and her eyes turning grey, now her hair can turn into a light pink! She uses her own emotion of fear to tap into her true powers, unlike Bete Noir who uses it to activate her Rhabdophobia ability.
Credits:
Betty model by me(original by Moyonote)
Tenacity Betty belongs to me, original Betty belongs to Camila Cuevas
Effects used:
T_SABShader_NEUTRAL(can you tell that it's my favorite shader?)
ExcellentShadow
ObjectLuminous
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Miki gave a cheek kiss to Betty.
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"Kumu⦠Why⦠Why can't I be like other human children?" Betty asked in a desperate tone, as she sat in her bed.
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"Dont worry Betty, you're so much better than most people your Age !" Yuu said as she was hanging upside down.
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Betty yelped up in fear as her hair turned more pink. Kumu meowed at Yuu in surprise and anger for startling his mistress.
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Yuu happily waved hi at Betty as she wasn't aware of Kumu's reaction.
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"Why are you in my room?!" Betty asked.
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"I wanted to pick your hairbrush but you scared me and I jumped to the ceiling..." Yuu said a bit nervous.
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"Why would you want to take my hairbrush?" She asked again.
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"I don't have mine in my room. I keep it in the bathroom. Like everyone else does. I just have the brush I use for Kumu's fur." Betty told her, brushing the Meowstic's fur.
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"It's that same sort of Brush Animals do need Betty..." Yuu said as Betty realized her Foster sister spoke about her Monster form.Β
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"I can't give it to youβ¦ Sorryβ¦"
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"Oh man... Only bad thing about being a Monster is needing those brushes..."
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The brown-pink haired girl remained silent.
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"Also the Summer is really bad...!" Yuu said sounding a bit whiny showcasing that despite her age she was a bit inmature.Β
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Betty still kept silent. "Can you⦠Can you please leave my room?" She asked.
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Yuu said Ok as she left the room.Β
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Betty just fell onto her bed. "I feelβ¦ Oddly tired todayβ¦ I think, I'm going to bedβ¦" She yawned, rubbing her eyes.
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(Dunno what else to put here.)
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I did though on an UF Idea regarding Asier/Asriel, Like there being an UnderFell "Asierra" who is the Opposite of Asier in personality, she being a social butterfly and very sassy.Β
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Eh... Aren't you fed up with the goats, as you've complained to me so many times?
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I'm more specifically Fed up with Flowriel/Aster.
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You kept complaining to me about goat monsters specifically.
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Look, that was in the Past, can't you let go of it ?.
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You compare new characters like Luna to Infinite all the time, already deeming then bad when they haven't even been around for long.
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I said, I did though, not that I would make.
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May I remind you that you compared Luna to Infinite as soon as she had appeared?
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To be honest there was similarities and I think Luna does NOT change things much, I mean what stops everyone from learning from the Monsters about Ciel and Agora ?
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The monsters don't know about Ciel and Agora. Even the forest monsters know little too nothing about them, even deeming their existence a myth, except Toriel and Asgore, who obviously have encountered Ciel once.
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and does that Makes Luna necessary to have ?, she feels like an NPC who "Tries" to help, but it's actually getting in your way.
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Is it necessary to have Blaine, Blizzard and Rain around? No. But do you see me complain about them being there? NO. Instead, I accept them.
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You see the things is that they Dont feel too much like the same thing Infinite was, I mean Rain is their friend and wants to help them, Blaine and Blizzard ?, they're NOT friends they're Allying out of desperation.
Luna is essentially a character who has something agaisn't the Main Baddie Ciel, Infinite had something agaisn't Zusak.Β
If you're going to comment on Rorak being like that too, remember he Wanted to destroy Thuja and then sticked around until Zusak was gone too, he wasn't friends with Asriel, he could get along with Sonja and Ruby, but Asriel ?, the Prince of Daria was just a Means to an End for him.
The Thing i'm getting to is, You have a few characters that could do Luna's Role, why not being resourceful and bring one of them back instead of creating a new one for the sake of an RP ?, If you're commenting on Blaine and Blizzard DO remember they're Old characters brought back and conditioned to fit UT.
Why NOT bring one of your old characters back ?, like Zero or I dunno a CoreTale ?.
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Luna has a very personal reason to go against her own father, never speaks about it, but that's not the sole reason. She knows that once he's drained all the magic of this realm, he'll erase what's left of it and she wants to prevent the destruction of another universe. From Luna's original universe, only she, Ciel, Agora and Luna's first and only friend Zeta are left, because Ciel destroyed their universe after he drained it of it's magic.
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now there's Zeta, see what I mean by creating characters just for the sake of a plot ?.
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You know, I had originally planned for Luna to mention Zeta before, but restrained myself from it, because you obviously hate new characters. And don't tell me you didn't do the exact same thing for Blizzard and Blaine. They're also just there for the sake of a plot...
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They might, but they're not a Repeated card like Luna is.
There's also the "Pecking Order"
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The fuck is a pecking order? And Luna is NOT A "repeated card" or whatever.
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Pecking Order is how I treat many of the things, let's say the New characters aren't that great on my eyes, I feel they're just going to be One-Timers.
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That makes no sense.
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I just plain dont like new characters if they're Introduced for the sake of a plot and it sorta revolves around them, Luna feels like she's there just because, heck I've would rather have Frisk protagonizing than having Luna around, Infinite was the same since he was the One Holding the Grudge on Zusak and the RP's seemed to focus on him rather than Asriel.Β
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So what? As soon as Blaine, Blizzard and Lucius were there, your focus shifted from Jack to them entirely as well.
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Not entirely, it's evenly shifting in between characters, Blaine and Blizzard present a thing the two Siblings have to deal with which is letting go of the Past, for Rain it's about being Biased and how that clouds you thinking, it's about tolerating others better.
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I have everything written down until now. Most of the time it revolves around Blaine and Blizzard as soon as they appeared. And there is way too much dialogue.
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Anything else you want to add ?, since we're not using this one a second time.
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Work on your grammar, punctuation and stuff like that. It's horrible to go through the entire text and fix it all to make it at least somewhat readable and even then, I am not satisfied with it. It reads terribly to me.
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Eeyup, Not doing this AU a second time, This one is first and Last.
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Yeah, you just hate EVERYTHING that's not your own idea.
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And you b*tch about everything that Ain't your Idea either, You're not creative at all if you have to churn out characters Instead of working with what you already have, I get Ciel and Agore were mentioned long ago, But Luna ain't even someone People would care about.Β
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And you churning out three random children for Rain, which she had with a MARRIED MAN while his wife is unnaturally accepting of it is any better, or what? Any normal woman would've left his ass, if she found out that her husband had three children with a different woman while his wife was gone. But Kanade is not a normal woman and got replaced by a tribal dog.
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