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deltoraquest03 [2020-12-10 03:32:09 +0000 UTC]

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SalvatoreMasterDenif [2016-11-16 01:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Ok, this is my first critique so...

First of all the vision: Dark and gripping! Just the setting for this sort of thing. Not to mention chilling. And seeing this was done on halloween as well only adds to said factors. Not to mention the glowing eyes. Now, I don't use SFM (just GMOD), but the glowing slit-pupiled eyes give off a rather alluring and hypnotic vibe that sends chills through the spine, in true halloween fashion. If I knew how to use SFM, I'd be interested in trying this sort of thing. All in all: Vision gets 5 Stars.

Next is originality: Unique, yes. But I have seen this sort of thing in The Jungle Book when Mougli gets wrapped up by Kaa (the snake) while being hypnotized. This reminds me of just that, but more awesome! XD Originality gets 5 Stars regardless.

Next, Technique: I can tell a lot of passion went into this and effort. I especially like the way Twivine, Plunder Pie, and Rarivine are posed- Twivine being all like "you're going to be one of us now" while Plunder Pie is nudging Starlight as if telling her "cheer up! You'll love being one of us" and Rarivine lounging on that vine just watching and enjoying the show. XD Technique gets 5 Stars

Finally, Impact: Dark, gripping, done on halloween, need I go on? Sends a chill down the spine, like I said. As for my OC, Salvatore Denif... as much as he hates Starlight Glimmer for what she did, he'd jump into the fray if he saw this. XD Impact gets 5 Stars for multiple impacts.

Now let's go to the judges for the results!

Vision: 10

Originality: 10

Technique: 10

Impact: 10

PERFECT TENS ALL AROUND!!! AND THE CROWD GOES WILD AD MERCFOX438 TAKES HOME THE OLYMPIC GOLD MEDAL!!!

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LightReading2 [2020-02-21 22:36:05 +0000 UTC]

think littlest pet shop had a song title BE LIKE YOU   where one of Blythe friends wanted to be just like blythe.  love the eye effect

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ESLM-Studios [2017-02-10 23:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Looks more like the Anti-Equestria to me.

euanm2.deviantart.com/art/MLP-…

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SalvatoreMasterDenif [2016-11-16 00:48:32 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! 10/10!! Not to mention... this might trigger a memory for an OC of mine... oh, Deeeenif.

: What, D-Mod? I'm very busy...

: ... ... ... (freezes in place as all sorts of dark memories explode in his mind... memories of when Denif himself was corrupted long ago by the Plundering Six. )

[Um... Denif? (pokes) Denif? You okay?]

: (without warning, Denif's eyes go Nightmare Mode as he draws out his black ice katanas with lightning speed) ... ... ... As much as I despise Starlight Glimmer for what she has done... I will not let such a fate befall her or anyone else! I never imagined I would ever say this, but... Plundering Six... prepare. to. Die.

[O.o']

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diegomolina [2016-11-01 03:05:55 +0000 UTC]

like

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D1n0-Mann94 [2016-11-01 01:53:19 +0000 UTC]

"One of us! One of us! Gooble, Gobble! Gooble, Gobble!"
youtu.be/9C4uTEEOJlM?t=16s

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DianeHeartbeat [2016-11-01 00:58:01 +0000 UTC]

<3

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GreenMint4265 [2016-10-31 23:13:08 +0000 UTC]

WHOA!!

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MakutaZuul [2016-10-31 22:53:58 +0000 UTC]

10/10
 

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suntwilig [2016-10-31 22:53:14 +0000 UTC]

looks super

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SeanMulqueeney [2016-10-31 22:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Happy Halloween

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LokosFermincho [2016-10-31 21:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh mah Gawd o_o

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gdpr-30814380 [2016-10-31 21:28:15 +0000 UTC]

Run Starlight Run

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arianaaviles [2016-10-31 21:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh S&$@! This is gonna be good OuO

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LunaHazACookie [2016-10-31 21:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Mmm yessss submit to the man Starlight. X3

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XioniaBlade [2016-10-31 21:10:53 +0000 UTC]

oh look at those evil mane 6, i wonder what they'll do to her? X3

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