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Published: 2006-01-26 04:04:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Lying lovers liea-laying they love
Sweet lies a-laying they love
Lovers lying sweet lies of loving
Of loving, sweet liars lay lies
Lay sweet lies of loving, sweet lovers
Laying lies the lovers lay
When liars love the a-layng
Sweet lies a-laying, sweet lies a-loving
Lovers, sweet lovers, lay a-lying
Comments: 2
simplytears [2006-01-26 15:33:32 +0000 UTC]
I like this piece a lot.
It reminds me of a madrigal.
I like the repetition. The way you just barely change the phrases and give them different meaning.
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metacognition In reply to simplytears [2006-02-19 00:03:57 +0000 UTC]
the fact that that's my only reply means that it probably wasn't worth you clicking on the link to get here. but thank you for clicking anyway. For that you get another.
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