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Published: 2004-10-02 20:23:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Empty.There are no other words for it.
That's what it seems.
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Endeared to friends
Loved by acquaintance
But still empty.
Gifted
Intelligence enough to challenge
Sacrficed for acceptance
Used to create a superior.
Make us awed
Then make us laugh
dance, dance
but still empty.
But not wanting to be filled.
Or are you?
the looks are long
to be considered wistful
Not the right word
But still empty
Everyone says
But noone thinks
Of the things beyond
Suggestful winks.
Of a heart so cold
and a wit so warm
but a care so free
and feet so worn
To have walked a long way
so far in the cold
With a body so young
But a mind so old.
But still...Empty
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It's not that I don't doubt my rhyming skills, it's that I forgot most of it didn't rhyme. Sorry. and just so you guys know, I'm over-analytical, so this only makes complete sense if you read too much into it.
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