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Published: 2017-08-05 18:08:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 495; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 2
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Description Lana and Safi protecting the Hotel so that people can evacuate when they spot a large horde of Barren encroaching in on their position.
Badly outnumbered, Lana quickly erects a wall of fire to hold the Barren back while the people continue to evacuate.
Safi notices that there is a gap in the fire wall that the Barren are seeping into and she runs out to stop them and eliminate stragglers while Lana stays behind to maintain the wall, protect the people and Kill any that try to fly above the wall. Once the rest of the people are evacuated, Lana and Safi head to the outskirts while the firewall slowly lingers away...

Some Side notes:
-Safi lost her dreamcatcher during the attack. She is really mad about that but for now she doesnt have time to lament for that.
-At first she wasnt too happy with Lana been with her, but later she realized without Lana, Safi wouldnt have gotten to far during the attack.
-While Her father taught her how a "battlefield" is and how to behave in one, It was a lot worst than the expected.
-Probably after the all of that, even with her stoic face, she was visibly shaken and affected.


I guess this is all? Hope everything is in order ;u;

Huge thanks to for helping the that small story and for the help with the background
oh and a Lana (the one on the right) belongs to  
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Comments: 9

lostlastexile [2017-08-05 18:31:46 +0000 UTC]

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Impact


Sinceramente es uno, a mi juicio, de tus mejores trabajos.

El fondo es muy acorde a la escena y le proporciona dramatismo. Los juegos de luces y sombras muy bueno y las luces en los ojos de Safi bien trabajados.

Se pierde un poco la forma del arma de Safi, sobre todo si es su hacha, pero bien.

La perspectiva también bien trabajada. ¿Se tiene en 3/4?

Ahora, la pesuña de Safi se ve algo plana, al igual que muchos de los monstruos que las acompañan. el cabello de Safi podría ser un poco más dinámico, se ve algo estático.

La ropa por el contrario luce bien siguiendo el movimiento del cuerpo

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BroozerPunch [2017-08-06 07:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Me encanta la direccion que tomaste con los colores aqui, se nota la seriedad muy intensamente

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MetaDoodles In reply to BroozerPunch [2017-08-06 15:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Si, y le da un tono como de pesadilla tambien.
Ahroa que lo pienso, tomando en cuenta que Safi perdió su atrapasueños, creo que funciona aun mas B'D

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BroozerPunch In reply to MetaDoodles [2017-08-06 16:49:07 +0000 UTC]

2deep4me
Si que se nota 

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FaceDownDagon [2017-08-05 20:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, exciting.

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CandyNaught [2017-08-05 18:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow!
I'm really digging the colours here. They're so moody, yet vibrant, it really gives the action an epic feel. Cinematic, even!

Very well done!

(I'm rather enjoying the flying monsters as well.)

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MetaDoodles In reply to CandyNaught [2017-08-06 00:56:34 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks! I tried to make it look like a "fake screenshot" 

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lostlastexile [2017-08-05 18:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Muy buen trabajo en este, chica. Realmente buen trabajo

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MetaDoodles In reply to lostlastexile [2017-08-05 18:39:02 +0000 UTC]

hehe gracias uvu

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