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Metal-Kitty — Botched Experiment
Published: 2008-07-23 03:05:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1436; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 30
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Eh...This was another attempt at a potential first pager for my new comic series.
x_x Bah... I like how it came out but my panels are so messy...
Image (C) Metal-Kitty
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looks cool to me, messy panels eh? I have messy panels when I do paper comics, (using a ruler may come in handy now and again sometimes though ) X3
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Gex:i wanna gask mask T-T
Me:
Gex: OH YEAH!!!!i forgot 
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Nice work on the first page here
( i won't say use a ruler 'cause everyone has said that) but this first page of your comic haas caught my interest :3
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Ruler is your friiiiend. XD I can't draw panels on my own for beans!
You should try coloring these in Photoshop with a multiply layer :0 The characters and outfits look so interesting, I'm just itching to know what their colors are!
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Gas Masks are a dark grey, red eyes, silver filters, uniforms green with gold lining around the black areas. x3
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If the panels are a problem, use a ruler! ^^
Since it's the 1st page of a comic, and itself has almost nothing on it, I can't comment yet. The possibilities of a plot starting from there are huge.
I'll wait for more! ^^
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Reccommended: buy a straightedge, or a ruler. Frames are very rarely hand-drawn. XD
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This looks nifty =^.^= Your mask and uniform designs are really top notch and original, but I must say:
"Look you worry too much. If we were ordered not to kill it, surely its not too dangerous."
I kind of snickered at that part, it just screams:
"CANNON FODDER" XDD I always feel sorry for the poor guys who have to go in places like that first...they always die. X3
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Hahah, that's awesome! 8D I think it's done pretty good. I'd like to see another comic series from ya, too. :3
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Ooh, I'd love to see a comic series from you. You have absolutely the perfect style for it
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