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Published: 2013-04-20 19:48:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1987; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 20
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I can't feel any warmth inside meYou're so close yet so far away
I know your touch should warm me
But still the chill will stay
I may seem as strong as stone
But in truth I'm filled with ice
And though I long to feel any warmth
I fear there is none to suffice
And still the poison spreads beneath my toes
Where the cold takes me nobody ever knows
I hear you call my name and it makes me smile
But I feel the emptiness inside me all the while
I am cold
I am corruption
I am destruction
I am all that's wrong with life
I feel old
A wild disfunction
A shallow eruption
A dull and dirty knife
I am cold
Too cold to feel the warmth
Yeah the poem aint the best. Don't care.
Have you ever pondered if something was fundamentally wrong with you? Like something was missing?
Feeling cold as ice lately. Not sure I like it.
Art/Metal (C)
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Comments: 8
Fireflamepaw [2014-06-03 06:13:58 +0000 UTC]
No matter what he is doing or anything he's always looking cool and good
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SuddenSketcher [2013-04-24 02:25:26 +0000 UTC]
Do you need me to write a poem, Metal-Kitty.
Is it finally my time to shine.
Ohmygod.
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Metal-Kitty In reply to SuddenSketcher [2013-04-24 06:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Need?
Hells no.
I'm quite satisfied with my poetic capabilities.
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RavenLunaticArt [2013-04-20 23:42:44 +0000 UTC]
That poem is beautifully written, and the picture matches it amazingly!
Well done my friend. c:
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KaputSugar [2013-04-20 19:57:42 +0000 UTC]
I feel that way pretty often, and usually I enjoy it at least a little. I've found that, as with weather and the sky, a cold front over the heart brings all kinds of clarity to my mind. It can be uncomfortable at times though, especially when I see how warm others are towards each other.
Anyways, great piece!
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