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great drawing. the colouring and lighting are awesome, though the anatomy seems a little bit iffy. i like the reflective effect you made at the bottom.
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thanks!
Ya ya i wasnt really paying attention to anatomy oops ; v ;
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ooh thank you so much ; v ;
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When I looked through my watch messages, this piece drew in my attention immediantely because of the bright colour choice (and I have to say, they bled really well, great job! ), and I found myself unable to have a closer look at anything else. I really love this sketchy, vivid style and especially the water-surface-ish [yay for neologisms!] underground
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oMg thank you so much??? wow that's so nice of you to say hhhhΒ
(lays down)
im glad you like it so much!!
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Goodart,kind of a simple style,but well made.
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thank you!! ; v ;
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fuck man i love your brushwork though this is really nice weeps on the floor c-can i have some of your talent/skill pls
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Oooo thank you esteru chan ; v ;
shhh (pets)
you're so good already stahp it
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ok critique
Keldeo is a horse-based pokemon and while you do have the workings of a pony-shaped critter it's only just so and resembles dog anatomy a bit more than horse anatomy. you don't have to freak out about it because it's a pokemon but for future reference if you want to draw something more pony-like it's good to get an idea of how they're shaped.Β
the lighting does have a good general flow but in my opinion it's juuust a bit chaotic. there's a general lighting but after that the secondary andΒ tertiary lighting are all over the place and it's a tad confusing.Β Β
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omg yea i wasnt really paying attention to anatomy here woops i see what you mean tho
ok thanks again jojo!! ; v ;
Smooches
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K here goes my critique:
I really like the colors used in this and the really soft look to them. Your anatomy is amazing and the legs are real good too. The mane is really full and flowy looking, and overall an amazing job!
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hhH h weh thank you you're really kind but that isnt much of a crit theyre just compliments....
i want looking for constructive criticism.
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that's more of a compliment than a critique isn't it? o v o;;
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Fffff idk nnng I'm just paranoid to say much. Not that in really needed to cos this was so good anyway....
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but that's not how a critique works at all... even if you think you're the worst artist in the world and you're looking at the best thing ever you should still be able to point out things that would work better based on your knowledge in art!Β
i'm looking at all the other comments with critiques in them and they're all incredibly positive and 'i love x, y, and z! i love this!' but nobody's pointing out things she can improve on so it's kinda just letting small mistakes slide by because the rest looks great.Β
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thank u / o \
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oMG GOSH THANK YOU ; //v // ;Β
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