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meterbe — Beyond Eternity
Published: 2006-08-07 18:27:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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Description His eyes flicked open, the place he was in was an unknown.

It looked like nothing just emptiness stretching on forever. A black mesa continuing to infinity.

He looked around in silent awe, “where the hell am I?” he asked his voice echoing off in the non existent cavity of space.

Reaching out his hand he touched an invisible barrier, tracing it with his fingers, he pushed harder and felt it give, then the plane of existence he was on began to shake violent but small detonations ripped through the area.

He pulled his hand away, everything stopped, and the void calmed and everything was as it had been. Looking round he raised his hand to the barrier again and gulped.

“Guess it’s time to jump start the big bang” he whispered as he ripped through the wall into the other dimension.

It was unimaginable for him as he saw the birth and death of everything, as time became a factor in the equation life flourished and died, everything became one as he looked on watching the amazing spectacle.

He felt it a numbing pull coursing through his veins; he watched in horror as everything expired, all life ceased to exist, and saw the world for what it truly was a lifeless conglomerate of flesh and rock, touched by swarms of ignorant living beings, the plague of life

Closing his eyes he stopped resisting relishing the only feeling he held as the force took over him, become him, he knew the answer now, this was divine, he was divine.

And he looked out unto the world he created and with his last breath gave it back its life, its essence, its soul.

He smiled as his body gave in, the strain to great for him to bear anymore, closing his eyes he slipped into the death that had long since hounded him.

With the last sight bestowed upon him, he looked past the planet teaming with life, past the emptiness of space, past the far reaching ends of the universe and beyond eternity, and smiled.
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Comments: 3

Deathinblack [2006-10-03 21:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Depth charging! Yay! Nice detailing. Lots of deep thinking there =3 You should be my Language Arts teacher, besides I hate the one I have at the moment, you're pretty good at writing. You should write a novel someday, I'm sure you could get it published

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meterbe In reply to Deathinblack [2006-10-03 21:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks never expected that good of a reply, maybe one day I will write a novel; I’ll make sure to send you an advances copy

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Deathinblack In reply to meterbe [2006-10-03 22:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Yay xP Tell me when you get to publish it

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