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Published: 2004-08-28 09:56:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 494; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 245
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Well...i havnt made anything in months. literally...like 10 months...school and everything just took up my time *sobs*so as a result...it sucks
but it just takes practice to get back into things. I need to give myself some credit for trying, so i post this deviation. Sorry to everyone who *used* to watch me this has got to be the first dev i submitted since the beginning of the year!
Constructive criticism is welcome, of course, i know i need it. it'll help me get back into the swing of things
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Hey, i don't know why i post on this one. Maybe cause there are only a few people who did so. First, i love your work, eventhough i'd say some of your pieces are a bit "impersonnal", i don't know how to explain that. I mean, the technical background is stunning, the realization is amazing, and you do great with light effects and vivid colors, but i just feel like it's kinda cold, not enough "human", or not as much as it could be.
Well, i realize this is not a very constructive critique, maybe if i say your Dev Id v2.0 looks really much more personnal (course, you're gonna tell me, it's you !), and thus it seems better *to me*, and maybe only to me.
By the way, just another thing, about your site. Maybe i'm not the first one to tell you that, but i can't see it properly. I'm using firefox last version, so it can't be a CSS problem or something. Don't know where it comes from, but all the writings just superpose, and i can't read a single word of what's written. Quite disturbing. Again, it looks great, that's why i'm telling i can't see it properly, just cause i'd love to !
Continue this way, you do great work !
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Ya its a good render, but that like beam up light comin off just dont fit at all.
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Nice stuff - the colours are great, but the dots/squiggly line just don't seem to work. What font is that?
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thanks for comment. the font is called "Kelt"
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The background blue looks a little blury? Hmm. I like the blue horizontal lines, nice touch, good white effect too.
You'll get back into the swing of things once you get going
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