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x-Jubilance-x [2012-09-04 01:11:52 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

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Impact

Why, hello! There are a few things I'd like to say about this piece

VISION: As for vision, I can tell you were going for cute, which you've aced, as far as I'm concerned. I love her fluffiness, and the tilt of her ears.


ORIGINALITY: As for originality, I'm afraid this is just a standard OC drawing, with the OC and the basic background, so I'm afraid I'll have to down-grade you on that.

TECHNIQUE: She's very cute, and drawing in MS PAINT isn't the easiest, trust me, I know. But you could've done better, adding a nose per-say? Or working on anatomy, coloring, and realism, although that doesn't seem to be what you're going for

IMPACT: This did make an impact on me, because overall it is a quite nice drawing, just a few improvements and you'll be great in no time e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>

OVERALL: I love this, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way, I just feel you can do better e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Because, you're a great artist. Good luck!

Cheers,

Sophie

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pokedot123 [2012-09-04 19:13:37 +0000 UTC]

daww >3< soo cute~!

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