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JCGloom [2016-06-14 08:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Is this a fanfic, cause I'm pretty sure this needs to be a thing.  

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writinginsecret5 [2016-06-11 14:38:48 +0000 UTC]

This is so dark, yet so beautiful. It gets me right in my feels!

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SUzma [2016-06-06 16:47:31 +0000 UTC]

Although I'm not a drarry fan,I absolutely ❤ this!! It is so haunting yet beautiful!!
Keep up the awesome work!🙆

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H-A-Cooke [2015-02-06 16:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Aloha MicehellWDomination !

Congratulations! Your deviation With Me  was the winner of the Drarry-Love   Mature Poll! You can find the journal link below, as well as the copy/pasted critique!

With Me Drarry-Love Critique Feature:  fav.me/d8gw5tc

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VISION 5/5

There is a distinct tone to this piece that reminds me strongly of  "Fight Club" by  Chuck Palahniuk.  The book was made expertly into a film starring Edward Norton (Protagonist) and Brad Pitt (Tyler Durden), a visualization of (SPOILERS!) Acute Dis-associative Identity Disorder (what used to be called Multiple Personality Disorder).

I feel haunted, because although Tom's consciousness takes on an appearance as a darker Harry, the struggles I can see in this piece are so clear. I could almost write a fan fiction based on this image!  Draco's fear, yet bravery and compassion, give a calming and haunting aspect to this piece as a whole.


ORIGINALITY 4/5

Although this isn't a new topic, you somehow have taken the idea of Acute Dis-Associative Identity Disorder and applied it directly to Harry Potter.  The characters are taken to a completely new level, the undertone of the body language presenting different visualizations.

In Canon Draco is submissive, yet unable to articulate his fear and beliefs.  Here, he's the dominant one, grasping  Harry's hands, mouth slightly open imploring if he's alright.

While the reverse is true of Harry; In Canon we see him become a leader taking on challenges. The fact that you re-purposed the "Harry is a Horcrux" idea into such a graphic image really shows your understanding of how vulnerable Harry is - the drawn in almost child like posture, wide-eyed. 

TECHNIQUE: 4/5

Background

While the central image and the background colors make sense, the chains seem to be the only things out of place. Perhaps, had you created a scene with blinds on a window, you could have used the light more effectively to create divisions of  shadow and light between the two men.

Body Language: Draco

My eyes are drawn to Draco, more than they are to Harry.  You have taken so much care with how you placed Draco. I can sense, as well as see, the slight tensing of the muscles.  His concern for Harry and his fear that the man, into whose eyes he is looking, has become someone else entirely.

Draco's slightly open mouth, also gives the scene urgency. I feel panicked, slightly afraid - concerned.


Body Language: Harry/Tom

There is a battle going on. Harry is trying to associate with himself, push Tom to the back of his mind. Yet, the dynamic there clearly puts Harry in a submissive position. Hands over the ears, a sense of rocking back and forth. While Tom, appearing as a slightly darker version of Harry, is dominant, looming above the scene, in control of everyone.


IMPACT 5/5

Definitely an image that brings a new tone, as well as a new concept, to life. It gets in the viewers head. Really addresses mental health, relationship health, all these things with a clear image. Almost everything (aside from the chains) comes together to create an intensely frightening yet believable scene.


~  H-A-Cooke  

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MaiJim [2014-12-01 20:08:49 +0000 UTC]

YESYESYES, we need a fic as well. Pretty please. 

Great job, this is amazing. I love it a lot!

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rababco [2014-06-13 07:39:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm not into Drarry (though this scene could either be romantic or close friends, I can kind of imagine Ron or Hermione doing something like this to comfort Harry) but it's a really interesting idea. I always thought Harry, Ron and Hermione (Harry especially) were too mentally healthy and unaffected by what happened to them during the epilogue. It nice that they all got married and had kids and had a happy life and everything but I thought it was too perfect. Harry witnessed Voldemort come back from the dead, witnessed a murder and was tortured when he was only 14, suffered from some pretty serious episodes of depression (especially in the 5th book, poor guy was basically suicidal) he had a psychopathic dark wizard trying to control his mind, was messing around with dark magic and almost killed someone, witnessed several more murders and then he died and came back to life. It's hard to imagine that he wouldn't have some serious issues as an adult, especially considering how he was as a teenager. Ron and Hermione went through a lot of what Harry went through as well and had their own traumatic experiences. I imagine that under their happy, successful lives they still struggle with their pasts, even all those years later.

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crazedbabe2 [2014-05-14 20:51:12 +0000 UTC]

AWSOME LOVE IT

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nagisa2345 [2014-04-22 17:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Amazing prompt and haunting imagery right there. Chilled my blood  on the first glance.

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kate-yoru [2014-04-20 18:19:12 +0000 UTC]

OMG, this really sounds interesting. *w* And you can draw sooo awesome pics to the fics. >w< Fantastic work again~ can't tear my eyes away~ haha
But you wrote there a word that bugs me... angst. Please tell me, does it end with something nice or will it be sad? Because if its something sad than I don't really wanna read it. They just tear my heart to pieces every time. TAT 
I have a feeling after seeing your pic and reading the description that it must be a great work but i'm kinda scared, that I'll cry if it has a bad ending. ><  (two days ago I was so emotionnally down that I cried at the end of Mulan.... MULAN! OMG, dunno what was wrong with me. :'D )
(Pm is fine too if you don't wanna write spoiler to other people.)

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smallsmiles [2014-04-20 01:36:38 +0000 UTC]

I agree, it is a fascinating prompt! Great rendition.

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