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Michaeldavitt — Extract from Out of the Blue

Published: 2014-01-04 20:41:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 369; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 1
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You have picked me out.
Through a distant shot of a building burning
you have noticed now
that a white cotton shirt is twirling, turning.

 

In fact I am waving, waving.
Small in the clouds, but waving, waving.
Does anyone see a
soul worth saving?

 

And when will you come?
Do you think you are watching, watching
a man shaking crumbs
or pegging out washing?

 

I am trying and trying.
The heat behind me is searing, searing,
but the white of surrender is not yet flying.
I am not at the point of launching, leaving.

 

A bird goes by.
The depth is appalling. Appalling
that others like me
should be wind-milling, wheeling, spiralling, falling.

 

Are your eyes believing,
believing?
Here in the gills
I am still breathing.

 

But tiring, tiring.
Sirens below me are wailing, firing.
My arm is numb and my nerves are sagging.
Do you see me, my love. I am failing. Flagging.



~ Simon Armitage   www.youtube.com/watch?v=ufZey1…






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Comments: 6

Trippy4U [2019-11-02 15:19:24 +0000 UTC]

They work quite well together

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Michaeldavitt In reply to Trippy4U [2019-11-02 16:16:52 +0000 UTC]

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Solotro [2014-10-17 04:24:10 +0000 UTC]

It's awesome!

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Hermetic-Wings [2014-07-04 17:43:56 +0000 UTC]

Like the contrast of the photograph and blue tonnes on the sky. Thanks for sharing

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Michaeldavitt In reply to Hermetic-Wings [2014-07-05 11:48:23 +0000 UTC]

sis you like the poem with it

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Hermetic-Wings In reply to Michaeldavitt [2014-07-05 18:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Love the poem also, it nicely fits the composition a lot

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