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MichELL333 — WIP ANY suggestions welcome.
Published: 2010-04-24 01:16:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 11
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Sweeney todd. i know i have to get darker, and obviously finish it haha. the finished product will be much larger than this, but i thought id see if anyone has any advice to help make it better.
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The softness of this is very nice, but maybe if you made the outline a little starker and more prominent than the rest of the shading. That way it might portray his personality better.
It's very nice, all in all. I hope my advice was useful and not offensive.
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not offensive at all. and by outline you mean..? make the figure darker or the background darker? here is the picture if it will help... [link] thank you for your advice
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You're welcome!
I just wasn't sure if you were wanting advice on anatomy, shading or composition. I do think that the proportions are nice, and the shading, but I think if you had some lines darker in either instance it would add to the atmosphere. :> I read that you knew you needed to make it darker but I think that a little more emphasis on some of the shading would be a nice touch.
But I think you'd have to see yourself what you liked the best. The background, the figure, or maybe no emphasis at all. :>
I usually don't give advice because a lot of times I can't explain well. 
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