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MiddleCharmedOne — Bleeding
Published: 2004-10-23 05:27:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Slit my wrists
Bleed my throat
Give the tub
A bloody coat

Give me a kiss
Take my life
Cure my pain
Saddness and strife

Kill me slowly
Drain me deep
And into death
I will slowly seep

Hear my pain
Feel my Sorrow
Do you have a knife
I could borrow
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Comments: 6

igorski [2006-04-24 16:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Stale, overdone, overused metaphors... and for the love of god, it actually starts off with 'slit my wrists'

cheer up, gloomy gal.

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MiddleCharmedOne In reply to igorski [2006-04-25 17:59:54 +0000 UTC]

well lets just say thats how I felt at the time

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BiteMeHard28 [2005-12-01 19:36:33 +0000 UTC]

No knife for you 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

FistfulOfSand [2004-10-23 05:29:02 +0000 UTC]

borrow*

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MiddleCharmedOne In reply to FistfulOfSand [2004-10-23 05:32:32 +0000 UTC]

umm... thanx

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FistfulOfSand In reply to MiddleCharmedOne [2004-10-23 05:38:55 +0000 UTC]

lol.. spelling is important when it comes to showing off writing.

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