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Hehe ^.^ Recently watched Transformers Prime and I just HAD to Write a Story with the awesome Decepticon DocHe's become my new favourite since he was introduced in one of the Episodes of Season 1, can't remember what one XD No set time this Takes place, just on the Nemesis sometime (but before Season 3, probably during Season 1 or 2, you decide
I'm still the best at titles yo XD
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Knockout x Human!Reader|Tickles|Prime
Requested By: Nobody
~Reader's POV~
"Knockoooooout..!" I drawled out as I hung upside down from the Decepticon Medic's arm. He was calmly typing away, allowing me to be steady as I dangled from his robotic arm. In all fairness, he might've been busy and occupied but I was bored, extremely bored.
"Knockouuuuuuuut..!" I whined looking him in his ruby optics while they were fixed on the screen. He gave a frustrated huff and then a sigh as he stopped typing and turned his helm so that he was staring, with a rather unimpressed look, right into my E/C eyes. I sealed my mouth shut to avoid agitating the 'con any further and stayed quiet, not so surprisingly still feeling very bored. I lifted myself up from my upside dangling position, carefully and slowly walking up the red mech's arm and onto his shoulder so that I was right next to his face. I slowly reached forwards and poked his faceplate, earning a growl from said mech. Tempting with fate, I reached forwards again and poked his faceplate. In return, I successfully earned his attention, after he had let a frustrated sigh out and turned to glare at me stood on his shoulder.
"What do you want F/N?!" He said, agitation lacing his voice. Oh man.. He's pissed.
"I'm bored!" I whined.
"Well that's not my problem, is it!?" He replied, huffing.
"Can we do something fun?" I asked, eyes lighting up at the sudden idea of maybe doing something other than watching him file up a medical report for Lord Starscream on Megatron on his datapad.
"What would you consider 'fun'?" He asked, smirking afterwards. I gave a blank expression as I observed his every move. He's up to something.. I raised an eyebrow at him as he placed his datapad down and grabbed me in his servo, holding me not far from his face. Gaining heat, my face suddenly became a deep red colour and I averted my gaze to somewhere else in the room. I heard a small chuckle erupt from him as I was suddenly attacked by his other servo.
"Ahahaha-Kno-Knocko-out-" I laughed uncontrollably, "Th-Th-That-tick-les-ahahaha."
"Oh does it now?" He grinned and tickled me even more all along my sides with his sharp digits. I continued squirming on his servo and laughing to the point of crying. Rolling, Laughing, crying, giggling, it was me. The room was filled with my laughter and at one point I thought everyone on the Nemesis could hear it, maybe even Primus himself could back on Cybertron. Eventually, he must've gotten bored of tickling me because he gave up and just kept me on is servo, observing my recovery from the tickle attack.
"Oh, I think I've gained valuable information from that little experiment," He smirked his devilish smirk as I cocked an eyebrow at him.
"And what would that be?" I huffed. Brought me closer to his face and whispered.
"That your ticklish and there's nothing you can do to stop me tickling you," He grinned and I gulped. Great.. How wonderful my life's going to be now..
~Hope You Enjoyed~
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Knockoutsfangirl [2023-09-10 21:07:08 +0000 UTC]
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nightshade145 [2016-03-21 15:30:08 +0000 UTC]
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First of, I'm a huge Knockout fan so this has to be really good. And it is! I loved the word choices you used and the topics. You framed Knockout's actual personality quite well while adding a bit of your own spin on it. The idea of being ticklish is very hard to produce and trust me, I've tried. But you executed it fairly well. One thing I might point out, since this is a critique, is that maybe having a slightly larger vocabulary. I feel like, and this is just me, that maybe you add stronger words, even if they aren't as strong as some. Like just changing an 'asked' to an 'implied' could spring the reader's interest. Overall though, I loved the storyline and keep up the good work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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StarDust114 In reply to nightshade145 [2019-01-20 15:34:25 +0000 UTC]
I meant to say fair.
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OTAKU2GAMER [2017-08-28 01:33:08 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME!!!!! YOU SAVED ME FROM BOREDOM....i was bored in realty πππ
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Midgesaurus In reply to OTAKU2GAMER [2017-08-28 09:27:57 +0000 UTC]
XD
Reality is boring anyways π
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KawaiiDino11meow [2017-03-02 02:05:31 +0000 UTC]
KAWAII!!!! X3
tbht I would probably do that to him as I am known to be extremely annoying to my brother when I'm bored! LolΒ
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Nekogirl6000 [2017-01-31 22:28:33 +0000 UTC]
XD lol the funny thing is that I can hear the voice who does knockout actually speaking the lines in this story xD and oh god I am sooo dead now knockout is gonna chase me for ever ....for love the primes SAVE ME PLEASE xD
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Midgesaurus In reply to DragonsOfTheStars [2016-11-30 15:57:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you xD
I'm glad you think so
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DragonsOfTheStars In reply to Midgesaurus [2016-12-01 22:33:55 +0000 UTC]
Pfft. Honeysugarwatermelon, I knowΒ so. XDΒ
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Midgesaurus In reply to OooshleyDeForza [2016-03-18 05:49:44 +0000 UTC]
Nuhhh, dont die!! *revives you*
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OooshleyDeForza In reply to Midgesaurus [2016-03-18 06:20:39 +0000 UTC]
*sees the story and dies again*
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CascadingThief [2016-03-17 20:44:47 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful *applause*
*gives an evil laugh, and starts tickling you*
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Midgesaurus In reply to CascadingThief [2016-03-17 20:47:26 +0000 UTC]
Haha XD Thank you *Bows
Uh oh.. *Tries to runaway*
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CascadingThief In reply to Midgesaurus [2016-03-17 20:59:41 +0000 UTC]
Why you're very welcome *grins*
*lets you escape* Awh, I only wanted to tickle you~
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Midgesaurus In reply to CascadingThief [2016-03-17 21:08:31 +0000 UTC]
Hehe *Rubs neck*Β
I don't like tickles XD *Hides*
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CascadingThief In reply to Midgesaurus [2016-03-17 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]
But tickles are fuun! ~
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Midgesaurus In reply to CascadingThief [2016-03-17 21:35:28 +0000 UTC]
Ehhh, if it's someone else, yea XDΒ
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CascadingThief In reply to Midgesaurus [2016-03-17 22:52:35 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's very true XD
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