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Published: 2019-06-27 20:07:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 98102; Favourites: 463; Downloads: 306
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ALRIGHT HOME FROM STORM CHASING!  Let's upload page 5 finally.  Apologies cause I thought I would have time to work on pages while out there....Know what....I had a feeling that was gonna happen.  Hehe I know better as a meteorologist and chasing for a good # of year that happens.    We got so busy on the 10 day storm chasing trip that I virtually had no time to do art or even upload pages cause we were traveling and had no net most of the time till we got to the hotel.....I mean internet for my laptop.    By that time it was like past 11pm-1am and we pretty much passed out not soon after we checked the 00z models for the next chase day and prep.  Lot of fun and I am uploading the chase videos on my Youtube Channel .  Lot of fun and we will be back out there in June 2020 for year 3.  No tornadoes btw again....not seen one since the 2010 chase


Anyway enough about that let's get on with page 5.  Onward with more of that teeth and ears transformations for Amber.    One of the few pages I didn't have to do a ton of background work.  You can see also around this page is where I started to get a better feel on how I wanted to do my panel structuring and what I feel needed to get the most out of what I wanted to put into it.  A flow if you will and a style.  I will say trying to do teeth in a style I like that fits me was certainly an interesting challenge.  On future comics I have a way I want to do a little tweaking on the initial teeth fang teeth growth.  Little less immediate into text like the top right panel.


So yeah this is getting a little long.  Anyway I am back home from storm chasing and I apologize for not getting this page out like I thought while out there in the Midwest.  You need to storm chase to know how crazy storm chase days and travel days get but it was very enjoyable with my 2 best friends who I have known for well over 10 years since our years in college when I was a sophmore and they were freshman and constantly keep in touch almost daily.  Anyway enjoy page 5 and I need to shake off this art rust.   


Social Media Links:

www.furaffinity.net/user/might…

ko-fi.com/mightymuffins Couple bucks on my Ko-Fi also goes a long way and is always helps.    Again don't have to if you don't want to. 

twitter.com/Mighty__Muffins

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DW13-COMICS [2022-02-28 10:27:17 +0000 UTC]

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Mighty-Muffins In reply to DW13-COMICS [2022-03-01 15:45:40 +0000 UTC]

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DW13-COMICS In reply to Mighty-Muffins [2022-03-02 13:22:06 +0000 UTC]

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FemaleTFWriter [2021-09-02 00:08:35 +0000 UTC]

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Mighty-Muffins In reply to FemaleTFWriter [2021-09-02 01:53:45 +0000 UTC]

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SonicBelch [2020-07-23 19:01:37 +0000 UTC]

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Mighty-Muffins In reply to SonicBelch [2020-07-24 01:55:22 +0000 UTC]

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CartoonMetalWarrior [2019-07-15 00:07:58 +0000 UTC]

That teeth transformation reminds me of my root canal where the novocaine started to wear off. Hint: It wasn't pleasant.

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Mighty-Muffins In reply to CartoonMetalWarrior [2019-07-15 01:10:48 +0000 UTC]

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DogGirlKari [2019-06-27 22:46:05 +0000 UTC]

This is definitely not bad! There are a few anatomy issues I can see, definitely watch your head depth, especially on the back of her head, looks like it just goes flat. Also the front gums of her teeth there goes all the way to the bottom of the teeth, should be a lot higher up. 

Also, watch dialog! A Character casually commenting on the exact things happening makes for boring dialog. Explore the characters internal thoughts and events.

Looking forward to where this goes!

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BulletBill105 In reply to DogGirlKari [2019-06-28 12:24:04 +0000 UTC]

I was just about to comment on that first thing. Constructive criticism that is actually good is hard to come by.
And I also see a lot of potential. There are a couple of things in this comic that remind me to LoboLeo's work. If you don't know who he is, I would recommend him.

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Mighty-Muffins In reply to DogGirlKari [2019-06-27 22:53:02 +0000 UTC]

Mhm.  Yeah the page isn't perfect.  Hehe I bounced around a lot of pages working on this comic so some pages will look crisper than others at times. 


The dialogue thing it varies from page to page.

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DogGirlKari In reply to Mighty-Muffins [2019-06-27 23:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Well there are some general anatomy issues that everyone runs into. I can do a quick redline over it and send in PM to show you kinda what I see and what you can do to fix some of it.

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Mighty-Muffins In reply to DogGirlKari [2019-06-27 23:52:19 +0000 UTC]

I mean if you want.  This is an older page mind you.

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