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ack..to be finished..i just need some input first...whats wrong with him? like go nuts in detail, but be helpful mind you ..
just gonna be a ref for an upcoming character but yeah wanna work out all the creases first
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Love it! The ONLY thing I see that could be adjusted is the body length. I think its making him look a bit like a cat with such a short body. 
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XD mm, he's a bit squished, aint he?
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lols i see that, i was just trying to say somethihng....... i dunt know those ears look great
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so... cute!! 
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n'awwww thank-you < 3333 dogs are just awesome ;D
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your welcome!!! the are!! i
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As everyone else has already pointed out, I think he/she could be just a tad bit longer. 
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clean lines would definately be my strong point
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You're most welcome!
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Looks great, and I love the fluff!! The face looks nice and symmetrical to me, and the pose looks great. Only thing I'd consider changing would be making the body a tad longer. I really like how clean the lines are.
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mm, he does look a tad on the scrunched up side there doesnt he. Thanks
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His hindlegs are a bit askew.. I don't know how to explain better.
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thats ok, theyre undergoing a major overhaul XD
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I likey. Not good with dogs, but I would stretch him out a tad - he looks a little compact - and that hind leg looks just a tad overtwisted.
Otherwise, great stylisiation and he should look good once your done ^^
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ah, thanks for pointing that out. I thought that looked ok tho cause a lot of the gsd or even a couple of shepherd mixes ive seen aout tended to have a fairly short spine o.o
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Ah XD, well I wouldn't know. But even then, i'd still go just that tad longer - not much, just a tiny bit 
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Will do! ^_^ haha, it may take a while tho, its at the bottom of my to-do list for now.
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His body might be a taaaddd bit short. Move the hind quarters a little farther out and see how that looks. >_>
Otherwise, Fantastic! I don't like when people ask for others to find imperfections when the picture is obviously perfect.
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XD nothings ever perfect except for the real thing .. everyones human and therefore errors, so theres always room to improve
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-flies in out of nowhere- I'd say make the body longer, and maybe more skinny, unless that's all fluff. Otherwise it's all excellent. :3
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mm, he's rather fluffy, but when wet he looks all bones
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Oh xD You should draw him wet, then!
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lol, actually i should..thats a great idea thank-you muchly!
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I feel like his shouldermuscleareathing is maybe a bit more rounded, but that may just be beause when I draw my dogs they get big jelly-bean shaped shoulders. xD;
Everything else looks fine I think. n_n
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hmm, i think now that you point it out it does seem a bit lacking, so thanks for that!
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I actually really like the way that back foot is turned c:
I absolutely love the way you draw fluff. Everything is so poofy. Your paw style is very nice as well :] And the way you draw faces and ears and legs and..
..lol.
But seriously, I don't see any major flaws in this. It looks great as is <3
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lol, like my little sister says, "everything is ten times better with fluffyness on it!!!" XD thanks a heap!
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him .. he's not a very manly him tho XD hence the fluffyness lol
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-gimme him- lol. j/k. Can't wait to see what him turns out to look like.
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I'd say the back paw, that looks turned.
To me, it looks like it'd hurt him awfully a lot.
Turning it forward, like the other paws would definatly fix it.
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I don't really want to turn it forward, cause i want to show the law markings/black of the leg markings using that leg...but do you reckon if i maybe move it forward/backward a bit that would help?
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Maybe.
If that's what you wanted to show with it, then keep it. o:
It just looks weird to me, cause I didn't know what was going on.
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lol, that's alright, basically he's just like about to turn around but then spotted something to his right (so looked at the screen) .. or that was the plan anyways XD
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Sorry to invade another's comments but I just wanted to say that something that might help would be to angle his right front paw a little more towards the screen. So it looks like he had to correct his turn?
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Do you mean so that all four toes would be clearly visible?
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Yeah. XD More a front-look from the viewer's standpoint. Picture staggering. One foot stays twisted one way, and the other foot twists outwards the other way.
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ahhh, yep i see exactly what you mean
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