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Published: 2004-01-12 14:31:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 97
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A cartoon i started... just a layout sketch... check the next parts...page2: [link] colortest: [link]
page3: [link]
page4: [link]
page5: [link]
page6: [link]
inspired by *Dark-Priestess and her vampire stories...
And its going to get better
Just plain ol b2 pen and some toning with photoshop
Hard critisism is always apreciated. Point out every flaw in there so i can eliminate them all
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Comments: 7
feotal-chyld [2004-11-17 11:58:10 +0000 UTC]
the grunge feel is really very nice.
I better go read the rest of it.
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myrhlyn [2004-01-15 19:46:07 +0000 UTC]
Hello, a member from here.
The nice thing about MSPaint, PSP, Photoshop, etc is that once you have your piece nicely drawn, you can just add the words graphically, without fear of screwing up and crossing out letters. I had trouble reading the beginning, mainly because of that. I would suggest that future editions of your comic be writtin in that manner.
Secondly, most of the frames are very well drawn, and you have a great drawing style of human figures. But the last one - the rat looks like Maisy, if you use your imagination. I'm sure you didn't want to draw all the garbage and details of the background - but that's what makes some comics so great. In a way, what you're doing is making a movie, and you owe your audience a full view and sense of that world. A lot of texture, a lot of detail, so that a reader believes you when you finally say - "Oh, yeah - and did I mention I'm a vampire hunter?"
Good luck with your work.
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mikaelhell In reply to myrhlyn [2004-01-16 10:18:21 +0000 UTC]
maisy? ...thankyou... so lots of detail... can do... and im still searching a nice font... dont want to use arial or courier
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madelief [2004-01-13 09:02:05 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting ^-^
Great lay out! << goes read next page>>
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Robokatt12 [2004-01-12 20:29:10 +0000 UTC]
Dang it- I was just getting into it and there's no second page...yet! Great job, mikael. More, please.
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mikaelhell In reply to Robokatt12 [2004-01-13 08:13:39 +0000 UTC]
yes there is ...and a third page just as i download it now
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