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First Page of the entry for #The-13th-key
(It's not to late to join yet)

Okay they won't be a cover for this, also it won't be a long story. The entry itself will have 8 pages. As you can see, these are only colored and shaded sketches. Outlining takes most time, and if there is something I never have enough than it's time. Like this I can finish one page each day (that doesn't mean there will be a page each day)

So you can expect, very little detail only and "dirty pages".
This is more for me to learn how to make cleaner sketches, better poses and paneling ect.

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Task of the entry is to show a little part of the charakters normal life:
Ley who works at the ECT in the Habitat enhancement-project (HE-projcet) as spy and scout, came back from an exploration trip with Chaluny . After every mission they have to write a report about what happened. Ley told Chaluny that he should go to his doctor to escape from this boring activity.
But his doctor Dr. Selvin really has something for him...

The one who said Ley is not serious enough, is his and Chalunys Mentor Ion: Ion

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If there are any questions ask, but I wont spoiler you.
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Comments: 52

Mikaley In reply to ??? [2013-03-16 10:44:39 +0000 UTC]

XD
Thank you.

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Keyrel6202 In reply to Mikaley [2013-03-17 04:45:00 +0000 UTC]

XD It's true, though. :3

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minimurkel [2012-11-21 14:25:29 +0000 UTC]

explosions !

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Mikaley In reply to minimurkel [2012-11-21 15:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Sie machen einfach alles Besser XD

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canius [2012-09-18 01:33:56 +0000 UTC]

I concur, explosions make everything awesome!

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Mikaley In reply to canius [2012-10-03 14:22:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, they make everything cool.

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V8Arwing67 [2012-07-19 20:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Everything in this piece makes me smile: the emotion of you characters, the way their clothes are made with animal features in mind (long necks, tails, etc), the flow of the dialogue and the soft glow of the lab both characters are in.

We need more quality piece such as this!

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Mikaley In reply to V8Arwing67 [2012-07-31 16:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you very much^^

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V8Arwing67 In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-31 20:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem!

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Keyotea [2012-07-19 20:16:30 +0000 UTC]

One of them really have four eyes.

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Mikaley In reply to Keyotea [2012-07-20 09:57:34 +0000 UTC]

And four arms XD
Multitasking XD

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Keyotea In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-20 11:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Like the hero ?

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Mikaley In reply to Keyotea [2012-07-20 18:54:06 +0000 UTC]

emm.. I don't know him

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Keyotea In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-21 01:50:07 +0000 UTC]

He is from the show "Ben 10" [link]

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TheDragonDragoth [2012-07-18 17:28:44 +0000 UTC]

I like you Comics :3

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Mikaley In reply to TheDragonDragoth [2012-07-19 10:45:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks^^

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TheDragonDragoth In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-19 16:03:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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Ebonyii [2012-07-18 11:14:20 +0000 UTC]

Waah ist das cool XD
Richtig schöne Pannels, und der Dialog ist auch klasse.
am besten ist immernoch der letzte höhö XD
Der Doktor .. XD der gefällt mir voll.... mit seinen 4 Augen

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Mikaley In reply to Ebonyii [2012-07-18 12:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Danke^^
Ich hab extra nochmal was über paneling nachgelsen, für den aufbau von seiten ect.
Ja der dok ist cool
4 augen, 4 arme, aber nur zwei beine XD

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Ebonyii In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-19 11:31:08 +0000 UTC]

ich glaub zwei Beine reichen völlig XD
noch zwei Beine mehr und es wär ein mutierter Spinnengecko o.o

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ookaookaooka [2012-07-18 04:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow, your art is amazing!

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Mikaley In reply to ookaookaooka [2012-07-18 09:28:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you^^

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Ol-Capricorn [2012-07-18 03:33:06 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Mikaley In reply to Ol-Capricorn [2012-07-18 09:29:01 +0000 UTC]

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Schmengee [2012-07-18 01:21:17 +0000 UTC]

YES!!! EXPLOSIONS FOR THE WIN!!

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Mikaley In reply to Schmengee [2012-07-18 09:29:37 +0000 UTC]

EPIC WIN

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Schmengee In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-18 13:00:24 +0000 UTC]

WOOT!

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someoneabletofindana [2012-07-17 20:31:42 +0000 UTC]

Ich hätte Chemie an meiner Schule nie abwählen sollen

Okay, also der Comic find ich gut soweit Mir gefällt der Dialog, keine zu kurze abgehackte Sätze aber auch kein Monolog. Am gesamten Auftreten deiner beiden Charaktere kann man ihre unterschiedliche Persönlichkeiten bereits unterscheiden und die Farbübergänge sind auch gelungen, sie haben alle einen sanften Übergang.
Die Art und Weise, wie du mit der Beleuchtung umgegangen bist gefällt mir.

Mein einziger Kritikpunkt wäre die Schattierung (nicht übelnehmen!). Man kann teilweise leider noch die Farbübergänge als lineare Striche wahrnehmen, aber ich weiß ja nicht wie viel Zeit du für die Seite hattest und bei mir würde ein Comic nicht einmal halb so gut aussehen

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Mikaley In reply to someoneabletofindana [2012-07-31 16:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Also ich werde es nicht berreuen wenn chemie weg ist XD

Danke^^
Ja kein problem. Das ganze ist ja kein ernst zu nehmender Comic in dem sinne. Das ist quasi nur für einen Wettbewerb hier auf da und da ist mir wichtig dass ich mit der zeit hinkomme.^^

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Bramblemask973 [2012-07-17 18:30:00 +0000 UTC]

Ley looks a bit like Yoshi from Mario in th first pic!

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Mikaley In reply to Bramblemask973 [2012-07-17 19:13:47 +0000 UTC]

XD
with the big nose yeah XD

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Bramblemask973 In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-17 20:20:55 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Chaluny [2012-07-17 17:33:58 +0000 UTC]

naa, ich mag die seite sehr, weißt ja.
Der gesamte Dialog ist klasse, bzw. die zwei..
Das licht ist toll und das shading, hach mann. Und Selvin hat seinen ersten auftritt *-* Schön dass die sache mit seinen augen schon angesprochen wurde^^ hast gut dargestellt mit dem lesen und gleichzeitig anschauen.
Ach ja, signi is auch weider schön getarnt

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Mikaley In reply to Chaluny [2012-07-31 16:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Ja selvin.
Er ist nicht nur irgendwie leichter zu zeichnen er geht auch schneller als die meisten anderen. Ich mag selvin *3*

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Linpa [2012-07-17 17:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Boah, die Seite ist ja genial *__* Alle Panels sind super. Und dieses Echsenvieh ist ja mal interessant, schaut auf den Zettel und schaut gleichzeitig auch Ley an. Freue mich schon auf die nächsten

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Mikaley In reply to Linpa [2012-07-17 17:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Danke^^
Ja bei Selvin weiß man nie ob er einen jetzt anschaut oder nicht, seine augen sind überall XD

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Linpa In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-18 10:44:16 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Motok [2012-07-17 16:51:41 +0000 UTC]

YEY! first page >

Interesting, I remember me and my physics teacher having a conversation very similar ... after all, things should explode XD

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Mikaley In reply to Motok [2012-07-17 17:05:45 +0000 UTC]

XDD
My teachers all know my passion for explosions.
My chemestry teacher wrote in in one test "What will happen if you put x and y together? PS: No, it won't explode"
That was so awesome XD

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Motok In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-18 02:56:50 +0000 UTC]

XDDD Cool teacher, My physics teacher put fire on my hand once, that was so cool

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Mikaley In reply to Motok [2012-07-18 08:59:55 +0000 UTC]

o-okay...
why did he/she that?

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Motok In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-18 16:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Because is cool! Relax it didn't hurt ^^ You can try it if you want is just put some acetone at your fingertips and pass over a flame >w< you'll have fire on your hand for 2~3 sec (after that shake it off!)
Note: I am not responsible for any incident XDDD

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ForeignFrontierRanch [2012-07-17 16:40:35 +0000 UTC]

Your fursona seems bored for no explosions.

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Mikaley In reply to ForeignFrontierRanch [2012-07-17 16:49:29 +0000 UTC]

For sure. That's just typical me.
Every third word I say while chemistry lessons is explosion XD

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ForeignFrontierRanch In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-17 16:57:26 +0000 UTC]

I wonder this happens:
-The teacher after explained the lesson: "So here we are. Any questions?"
-You, pulling your hand up: "Yes, I have one. Does it explodes?"

I mind what' s your teacher' s reaction.

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Mikaley In reply to ForeignFrontierRanch [2012-07-17 17:11:16 +0000 UTC]

I already did this XD
Our teacher is really friendly and funny, she laughs about it.
she even wrote in one test "What will happen if you put x and y together? PS: No, it won't explode"
That was so awesome XD

I wonder why I have so good marks. The only thing I do ist drawing and asking if it explodes...

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ForeignFrontierRanch In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-17 17:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Well I would have asked: "Does contains acid?"
When I see some liquid in any bottle I do always ask it.

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Mikaley In reply to ForeignFrontierRanch [2012-07-17 17:25:09 +0000 UTC]

that's good, befor you drink it better ask if there is acid in it XD

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ForeignFrontierRanch In reply to Mikaley [2012-07-17 17:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Lol, and better keep eyes open: Once I found a mosquito in my ace jioce and a fly in mu tea XC The fly was terrible, I felt it fouching my lips... eww.

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Mikaley In reply to ForeignFrontierRanch [2012-07-17 17:39:15 +0000 UTC]

mosquitos are evil
My arms and legs are full of scars, from their bites :C

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