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Published: 2009-07-09 14:49:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description poster mock-up for the second concept
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alvinpck [2009-07-10 12:42:56 +0000 UTC]

You need something to support the claim. As it is, this ad don't even give me a reason to response. "The smarter choice" work better slightly as a branding, even so, is it so overused.

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mikehandsdown In reply to alvinpck [2009-07-10 18:40:55 +0000 UTC]

im sorry i should have explained, this was part of a much larger product design project (not advertisement) where a small part of it was to display the product we'd designd on a poster, the text is practically irrelevant, it just looked better than putting 'this is where the text would be' thank you tho for the comment, thats some good advice tho and ill bear it in mind if i ever venture down the advertisement path.

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