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Published: 2018-04-02 20:49:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 23916; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 27
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When everyone remember of you exept yourself...Done with:Β
- Pony ceator
- Vectors
- Hasbro- My little pony
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My comic is not welcome on derpibooru ^^Β They have standards X3
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alrightβ¦β¦but I think they`re pretty goodβ¦β¦
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Any news on new chapters? I'm having withdrawal waiting for the story to continue lol
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i have som many things to do in RL, but i have good hope to have time to continue one day ! ^^
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Oh my, now I really want to know what's next.
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hey bestie, It's been like an eternity. Anyway love you
Hugs and Spanks
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FINALLY!!!.....welcome back!!!
WOW this is really getting good....what will happen when the girls find Easty?
Hmm....I think your proofreader has all the English translations covered but that one panel...
Panel 3: "Yeah Spanked. And that's not a word to say another." perhaps should be "Yeah spanked, and she'll do it for one reason or another."
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I am starting to get a little worried about following this comic. I still am on season 4 of the show and there is sooo many episodes to catch up on.
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Don't worry about this: this comic is in the real same time that the show. It can happen a fun season of the official MLP before one episode of EastStern, that's why Glimmer "suddenly" appear now
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I have to admit, Ms. Cherilee isn't exactly the most assertive when it comes to stopping ANY form of bullying. To me she's always been too soft, which is why the problem never went away for the LONGEST time. After all, it is her job to help prevent bullying from progressing.
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No kidding, i was thinking the same
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I...can kinda see why EastStern would punish the teacher, and although it was embarrassing for her, she should at least be grateful none of her students were in the classroom.
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Cheerilee was spanked and had to write lines. But yeah, she was lucky it was not a filly show.
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*tacklehugs* Yay! Welcome back, Miss Mina! I missed you! Also, ready for my proofreading? I'll flop over your lap if I must.
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*shufflles your hairs*Β Β Β good boy
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*purrs and flops over your lap, albeit not bare-bottomed yet - that's your job!*
Previous comment:
- "*shufflles your hairs*" - should be "*ruffles your hair*". *razzes at you!*
Panel 1:
- "And are you sure of this, Twilight?" - might be better as "And are you sure about this, Twilight?" or "And you are sure of this, Twilight?"
- "Also, the proof she got talk for itself." - should be "Also, the proof speaks for itself."
Panel 2:
- "I never seen her before." - should be "I've never seen her before."
- "But she sure look like troublesome." - should be "But she sure looks troublesome." or "But she sure looks like trouble."
- "... think in the way she want." - should be "... think the way she wants."
- "... her law, you'r spanked." - should be "... her law, you're spanked!"
Panel 3:
- "Her land seem to be far to be a..." - probably should be "Her lands seems too far away to be..."
- "And that's not a word to say another." - I think this should be "And that's not a word to say often."
- "She can litterally..." - 'literally' only has one T.
- "... and wack..." - it's spelt "whack".
Panel 4:
- "We all know she do this..." - should be "We all know she does this..."
- "... for a reason or another..." - should be "... for one reason or another..." or "... for some reason."
- "I never felt like it." - maybe say "I never felt like helping her!"
- "The map stopped to bring our attention to it." - better as "The map brought our attention to it."
Panel 5:
- "I refuse to let it down." - should be "I refuse to let it drop."
- "Also, it's maybe our chance." - better as "Also, it might be our only chance."
- "...it will maybe help Equestria." - better as "... it might help Equestria."
- "... her cherrished..." - 'cherished' only has one R.
- "... discipline way." - should be "... way of discipline." or maybe "... form of discipline."
Panel 6:
- "At first..." - should be "First things first..."
- "Let's report princess Celestia about all this." - 'princess' should be capitalised here as it's part of her title, and should be "Let's report this to Princess Celestia." or "Let's inform Princess Celestia about all this."
- "Our poor little behind.." - should be 'behinds' - there's more than one bottom to smack!
- "...another tyran." - should be "...another tyrant."
Panel 7:
- "Ho my Celestia." - should be "Oh my Celestia."
- "You talk of an overdue." - better as "You talk of something long overdue!"
- "Yes, I guess." - given her uneasy tone, I think this would be better as "Yeah, I guess."
Panel 8:
- "You acted exactly like the princess EastStern, from SaddleSore." - should be "You acted exactly like Princess EastStern from SaddleSore."
- "You both have sure something in common." - should be "You both sure have something in common."
- "Ha? How that?" - should be "Ha. How's that?"
Panel 9:
- "... she punished me for some arguing between students..." - better as "...she punished me for arguing with other students..."
- "Hmmm... She was maybe right..." - should be "Hmmm... maybe she was right..."
- "right, we have..." - use a semicolon rather than a comma.
- "... we have to say "stop to the bullies"." - should be "... we have to say "stop" to the bullies."
*flops over, nervous* I'm ready.
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>8C
I'm so going to punish you.
Hard.
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Not in public though, please. *gulps* What did I do?
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I know miss, but i make some questions and you miss dont talk back, and o miss your posts miss
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Yup, even if EastStern ones are....scary
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amazing as usual. its been far too long since i saw one of your comics. i always wanted to make a saddlesore anthem for her but i couldn't think of one on my own.
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The anthem of her land ? *giggles* I think i have one.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=74bhbuβ¦
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i love that song. i'd love to make my own lyrics to it.
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You have permission from the princess
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its a working progress. but from the top of my head i got this.
welcome to our most glorious kingdom, behave yourself or your bottom will be tanned. our most beautiful princess, won't tolerate bad behavior in her clan. her wisdom is without match, sore bottoms are attached, to those that go against her will. her love for us is strong, her beauty needs no song, from those that declare her as frill.
that is what i got so far.
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It's starting well. If it's good enough at the end, i'll make a video with the lyrics and the music in the background ! ^_^
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i was thinking of the lyrics for a while. second verse.
welcome to our most glorious kingdom, the princess's love is for all to share. if you misbehave she will paddle you, it is only fair. if you want to live here, she will tan your rear, if your not care with what you wear. do not be mean and better be more lean, for our queen's aware.
chorus:
princess eastern is our beautiful leader of this great wonderful land. her love can be rough, even though she has no hands, glory to saddle sore. our ruler is a powerful mother, with a gold made out of gold. others may not see, what her true intentions hold. glory to.... glory to saddle sore
third verse:Β
welcome to our most glorious kingdom, princess eastern welcomes all. care for others in this glorious king or our princess's hoof is gonna fall. truth be told she loves, all the ponies low or above, her love is great and fine. she has little fear, for little brats here, cause she is a ruler who is fair and kind.
chorus two:
saddle sore is the kingdom, of equal rights and freedom. every pony, young and old, has to follow the laws it holds. glory to, glory to saddlesore.
fourth verse:
do you believe our dear ruler is evil, then you must face her army and her guards. herΒ love is vast and endless, even though her past is all in shards. that is why she is a true ruler of this land. she will never abandoned her kingdom for a different clan. she loves her kingdom to the end of the land. she is the ruler of saddlesore!!!
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You'r for sure and forever a loyal subject to SaddleSore, Dear.
And you made for sure a long Anthem. I'm proud of you.
I'll show this to Circe
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i'm super happy you like my anthem. i wanted to match the length of the song. i didn't want to half ass the anthem's length compared to the songs length.
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This isn't half-assed, it's red-assed.
And in a good way !
Excellent job, Spankingmaster.Β
*listens to a chorus of red-assed ponies sing this*
^__^
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thanks. that is what i wanted to hear. you and mina always make my day better with your artwork and comics. i feel like hugging the two of you.
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Great to see you back! And the plot thickens! I wonder who will be spanked next... or, rather, in which order. ~_^
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All depend what happen to EastStern
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Alright, new page.
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Eh, doing what i can ^^!
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Give EastStern some bees to the butt. Give her a taste of her own medicine.Β
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She got some in the past already, but never bees so far. ^^
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That MUST be arranged... >
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Yes, it must !
X3
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Another lovely page, I'm happy you had some time to yourself to continue this, it's been a while. ^^ You've gotten quite good making these pages, hope to see more soon.
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I have 2 weeks off from work, i needed it
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