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Published: 2007-03-16 10:10:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description I find sanctuary
in sweet melody,
even heavy beat
drowning reality
in lyrics
catchy riffs
as your outline
becomes fuzzy
as the music
begins to fade...
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Comments: 4

Silverlion [2007-03-16 12:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Short,but solid and good work. Very nice.

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mindless-pixie In reply to Silverlion [2007-03-16 14:20:49 +0000 UTC]

you think so? It woulda just been 3 lines then I kinda thought about it more =o

Think it works ok? I never really know what I'm writing hmmm.

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Silverlion In reply to mindless-pixie [2007-03-16 17:50:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I think it does work alright. But you know an advantage of words is you can play with them, move them around and try different ones easily.

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mindless-pixie In reply to Silverlion [2007-03-16 19:03:11 +0000 UTC]

drawing is so much easier to me...

I battle to sketch the picture in my mind with words hmmm give me a pencil and walla

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