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Published: 2005-05-16 09:38:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 191; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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I shall steal you awayto the darkest depths of my cavern.
There where the world seems dark and fowl
you'll be my light, my angel,
warming my heart with every breath, every caress.
I'd gaze upon your beauty in the faint twilight,
and know this is right,
when we play in the mirroring waters,
exploring eachother,
mind... body
and soul.....
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Comments: 16
Skapie [2005-05-17 16:23:21 +0000 UTC]
dis te oulik, very nice work. Reminds me of my eie bokkie en hoe dit voel. Bly jy het dit ook uiteindelik gekry
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Silverlion [2005-05-17 00:05:07 +0000 UTC]
how terrible! to steal her away--both of you should be in the light
*hugs* wonderful poem, but I keep hearing "My preciouss..my...preciousss." in it
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mindless-pixie In reply to Silverlion [2005-05-17 05:38:32 +0000 UTC]
*giggles*
Well i just wanted to take her somewhere private? i'm not one for public show of affection
she is my precious hmmm oO Can ear her as a ring too if it need be >.> *Giggles*
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hunnybunny09 [2005-05-16 17:02:51 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwwww its so cute. Very nice, and I'm sure the girl you wrote it for must've loved it!
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mindless-pixie In reply to hunnybunny09 [2005-05-17 05:40:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh she did *giggles happily*
thank you very much
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xbleedxeternalx [2005-05-16 14:51:16 +0000 UTC]
This is really good. I wish I could find a girl that would inspire me to write like this
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mindless-pixie In reply to xbleedxeternalx [2005-05-17 05:40:32 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm maybe? *clings to her girl* mine >.>
hehe thanks though
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mindless-pixie In reply to Nojoke [2005-05-16 14:29:12 +0000 UTC]
*giggles* you think? I thiink I'm the lucky one though
Thanks for the comment
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dreams-2-reality [2005-05-16 09:42:08 +0000 UTC]
Nice. I like your style too. Good expression.
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mindless-pixie In reply to dreams-2-reality [2005-05-16 14:25:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much
I have a style? hehehe i jsut write what comes to mind
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