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Mini-Crushies — it's raining somewhere else
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Published: 2019-03-02 00:40:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 440; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Hello ! I'm from , let's time to critique !
So when I look for make a comparaison of the remake, we're agree the new one you made it's many way better than another one. The original sound too flat for me, but I like the character. Now we focus on the remake, this is a nice little scene ! The absence of colors justified the ambience with also the rain and the face of your character. It's funny to see it's like old cartoons, 1920's aera. I like your charadesing with big eyes and a stick's iris. Same thing for big hands, I'm sure chibis or things like that were one of your inspirations for her. In general, the scene is simple but that works good. The negative part on my point of view it's the lighting, your artwork could be better with a lot of lights effects. I see this a little bit on the girl but I think it's not enought, just made this more visible. In conclusion, next time be aware about the lighting and shadows. Maybe it's your artistic choice or your style, but maybe you can try to sse what's look likes. Anyway, this picture tells a story and it's nice ! Good luck for the future.
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You're welcome young girl ^^ !
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oh! thank you for the points!
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You're welcome ! It's not big but a little help can be good ^^
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Urm... I think that I give to the draw arround a 6, the only fault I can see is the raining, y think that the whater splases shold change of size depending if they are more or less near, by another way... I think that the backgrond sould be a little more detailed, maybe looking for a a more natural grass effect.
In the same way, I think that the umbrella shold be a little more realistic, and the clothes, I think that sould have some kind of wrinkle. But I should insist that the draw have the basic to work as a good draw the, composition is good, the composition works without problems and the contrapicado plane enfatizes the sad emotion, and finally, and most important the drawing stile have charisma It's differentiable.
Finally I recomend you someother stiles that remember me yours such as cuphead or in some moments epic Myckey They uses that vintage style in very interesting ways, well I really think that you can find inspration in all the old cartoons or maybe in another vintage ways I recomend you some videoclips as Rock It For Me, of caravan palace www.youtube.com/watch?v=fBGSJ3… or she She Wants Me Dead of cazzete (www.youtube.com/watch?v=FHccCl… ).
PD:Sry if I have grammar problems, I'm still learning english, and Good luck with your drawings.
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