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Mintblue β€” Cold
Published: 2003-10-29 12:23:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 23
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Description Cold

For nights I have wondered,
what made you changed so drastically.
Like the season changing from summer to winter,
I can feel the chill in my bones.

I guess I know why you like winter now,
because your eyes snows and your features are icy cold.
The look in your eyes cut me like blades,
though the crimson flowing out of my heart will never show.

Is it too late to turn back,
if only we were like before.
All the warmth has disappeared,
abruptly taken away from me.

I wish this is just a nightmare,
It hurts too much to be reality.
Why did your warm eyes feel like icy blades,
cutting my flesh and causing me to bleed.

If only nothing had happened,
if only we still have love.
If only you’re as warm as before,
and your look doesn’t feel like blades.
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Comments: 10

StanelyJava [2004-02-05 21:31:07 +0000 UTC]

-wipes tear from her eye-
This is so far from lame.
Wonderful Wonderful Job...
Such saddness...

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myst-o [2003-10-29 17:39:11 +0000 UTC]

I feel chilly.. (O.O)

Kidding~!! (^v^)
Anyway, was that a poem or a song? (^^; )
Well, whatever it is, you describe the coldness pretty well...
Omedetou~! (^,^)b

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SHF [2003-10-29 14:34:16 +0000 UTC]

sorry but in my small little mind, poems shoudl rythme *sigh* I shalt call yours a song or a piece of literature... cool meaning

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darkcrimson [2003-10-29 14:20:55 +0000 UTC]

i like the song, but there is something i loooooooveeeee -- the word 'crimson' in the second paragraph X33 , *ego*, haha, just joking. btw, it doesn't matter whether you have rhythm or not, it's too common ^-^! and your stuff are unique!

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phoenixz [2003-10-29 12:58:50 +0000 UTC]

oooh pretty!!!

I think it goes well with my picture^-^

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Drahcir [2003-10-29 12:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!!(as always)I guess you feel better now...

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Mintblue In reply to Drahcir [2003-10-29 12:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Arigatou~~~! ^-^ Heh heh, yea, better. Thanks! ^^~
- Mintblue

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singthesorrow487 [2003-10-29 12:32:16 +0000 UTC]

I love it....and very nice imagery!!!

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aquilier [2003-10-29 12:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely written, and you managed to give me a good imagery... Well done! Be proud of it

Have a great day,
and take care!

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Mintblue In reply to aquilier [2003-10-29 12:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! *bow bow bow* Thanks! Have a grat day to~ ^.<

- Mintblue

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