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MiraLillyAJ — Watching AJ CreepyPasta

Published: 2014-08-15 17:11:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 3385; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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I was really nervous the day it all happened.


Animal Jam had been shut down for a few days, I decided to look into it.


I made my choice to do something nobody has ever done.


I was going to hack into Animal Jam, and check out some stuff..


I was going to use a coding program, and check out some of the unreleased things.


I opened a coding file, and I went into the Animal Jam head quarters.


I opened up a file called “Beta Adventures”


Those had never come out yet, this was 2012.


So take a note, there was no existence or knowledge of adventures until now.


I opened up the file and it loaded, there was only one adventure.


It didn’t even have a name, or anything.


I opened it and I signed into a fake account so I wouldn’t be caught.


It was really strange, something I’d never seen before.


I started the adventure.


I was taken to Jamaa Township, I felt as if I was being watched.


I explored the entire place, and everything around me had become disfigured.

Everything was swirling, and the color was saturated.


It looked abandoned, as if nobody had ever visited Jamaa in years.


Everything was still and motionless, there were no other options but to move around.


The more I moved, the more and more I felt watched.


I saw stirring in the bushes, but when I went over to them, nothing happened.


I clicked on the Jamaa Central in the middle of Jamaa, and it opened up.


I looked in the gallery, people had drawn out the words "Help Us."


There was nothing else in the Gallery but cries for help.


Then I looked at the Howls “He is watching us” 


I became slowly nervous, then I began to think It’s only part of the adventure.


I looked at the Activity Calendar, there was only one grey box.


On the very last square on the calendar it said “Leave now”


But unlike the usual, there was no information below the short content.


I exited out, now there was no color in the game.


Any color had been completely drained from all of the pixels.


I wanted to leave, but there was no place for me to go.


There was no source for me to make contact on Animal Jam.


I typed in the link to Animal Jam and my laptop couldn’t identify it.


I hacked back in, and I was in the same place in the adventure I was last time.


I started to get creeped out, but I was too bored to leave.


My dock had disappeared from the side of my computer, not only that.


But it was full screen on the game, I couldn’t click on anything at all.


Everything was gone but the screen and the link above my game.


There was one option, I could reload.


I reloaded, and to my utter surprise, all the servers were empty.


Except Bakoy, there was one green circle.


I tried to enter it, but It said the room was full, and then it greyed out.


I didn’t believe it, I wasn’t the only person on the game?!


It was impossible, Animal Jam was shut down for weeks..


That must mean theres another hacker.


As I was about to leave, all the servers had been renamed with “Watching”


Except for one, and that was Bakoy.


The “Watching” servers were greyed out.


Bakoy was the one and only server I could possibly enter.


I thought for a moment, I decided I was going to enter the server.


I clicked it, and without loading I was there. 


There was another person there, but it was an Animal I hadn’t seen before.


It had no nametag.


When I clicked it, the name tag would never load.


After I clicked it, the player had left.


It would come around every once in awhile, and then vanish before I could click it.


Then, it stayed for a second, and I clicked it.


This time, it didn’t grey, It’s username was “Watching”


The players eyes grew larger, and they looked at me, they looked angry.


Everywhere I moved my cursor, It’s large human eyes followed.


It had extremely small pupils. 


The more it followed, the larger the eyes got and the smaller the pupils.


I was really freaked out, I tried exiting out of the player card.


Only to see more and more disturbing reactions from the player.


Finally, I exited, I clicked to move, and the player followed.


I realized I could go to my den, I quickly clicked the den option.


Once again without loading, I was at my den.


My den looked aged, like some sort of old movie, it had those old black dots too.


It was in black and white and everything was floating, like a dream.


The edges were blurry, and it wasn’t the den I expected it to be.


I was also floating, and it was extremely laggy.


Somebody had entered my den, It was the thing, and he was following me.


Where ever I went, it followed me.


It copied all my actions, and whenever I switched to an animal he did too.


Why would AJHQ put something so creepy, and weird like this in the game?


My sound turned on without me touching it, it was something I’d never heard before.


It was a scratchy sound and there were people talking in the back round.


I ran inside my den and the color flowed back, and the sound went away.


The weird animal, the thing was faced towards the corner of the wall.


He was rocking back and forth, he turned his head in all the way around and stared at my player.


His eyes grew, and looked at me, he was moving towards me now.


I moved my player, and he appeared right next to me.


I moved it again, and he was right beside me, then I went outside, and he was gone.


There was a very small window, the curtains ripped open, and he stared through.


His giant human eyes were looking at me, not at my player this time, but into my actual eyes.


I decided to test it out, I didn’t think his eyes would follow, but I tried anyway.


I moved my head to the left, his eyes followed mine.


I knew this wasn’t part of the adventure now, and he was actually watching me.


I hadn’t noticed, but now I did, my camera light was green, that meant it was on.


I was shaking and my heart was loudly pumping.


I slammed my laptop shut, fearing the thing knew where I was.


I was furious at myself, now my family could be possibly harmed, if they’re hacking onto 

my laptop they can find out where I live!


I cried into the palms of my hands, hoping it would just work out..


I shut down my laptop and left to go watch television.


I turned it on and it said there was no signal coming from the cable.

  

Weird, I went to go get my Ipod, but it had no battery.


I plugged it in for about an hour and went back to it, it was still dead.


I went to my Xbox, and I turned it on, waiting, it just shut off.


I began to feel even more uneasy, and really stressed.


I put the thought out of my head and decided I was going to check the cable box.

  

I checked it, everything was fine, but nothing was working..


After I checked it, the power went out.


It was night outside, so it was pitch black in the house.

But I could see outside.


We have a power generator, so I got it out and plugged my phone in.



I quickly dialed 911, my hands shaking, almost dropping the phone.

  

“This is 911, whats you’re emergency?”

  

 “Help me, please!”

  

“Somebody is coming for me, please you have to help me..”


 “They must have hacked into my power network too, they turned everything off, but they 

didn’t cut off my phone!”

  
“Ma’am we’ll be right over, what’s you’re address?”

  

I heard breathing in the back round, but it sounded like it was from another phone.


“What’s your address again, honey?”


I gave them my address, and I heard someone hang up.

  

The phone rang, It must be the police now, I picked it up.


“I’m on the road to you’re house, it won’t be very long now..”


I couldn’t breath, I held my hand over my face, almost choking to death.

  

“Leave me alone, I called the police, and they’re sure to come!”


I looked in my drive way, somebody was coming down it.

  

But it wasn’t a police car.

  

“I broke your separate telephone line, I’m the only person available to call now..”

  

“This is the police, open your door ma’am!”


I opened the door, but it wasn’t the police.

  

It was the guy who was stalking my call with the police.  


He had a gun in his hand, and a mask on his face.  


He had blood on his shirt, I screamed, and slammed the door and ran inside.  


I looked out the window, and he was gone.  

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Comments: 78

ArcticWolfGang [2018-06-01 17:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Note to self.....Never hack animal jam....(I'm only a kid)

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ArcticWolfGang [2018-06-01 17:17:50 +0000 UTC]

.......This is why aj is the creepiest game in the WORLD!!!

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Homeward-Stars [2017-03-18 19:32:34 +0000 UTC]

CREEPY

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FoxyDaPirateFox99 [2016-08-30 02:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Note to self....don't hack AJ...*internal screaming*

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wickedlimes [2016-05-30 19:47:44 +0000 UTC]

It's 21:48.

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KazeTheArtist In reply to wickedlimes [2017-08-31 04:43:59 +0000 UTC]

SAME

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kittenlife108 [2015-12-31 11:22:39 +0000 UTC]

okie note to self never hack ajhq

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kittenlife108 [2015-12-31 11:21:38 +0000 UTC]

omg so scary

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GenuineKILLJOY [2015-11-26 04:17:09 +0000 UTC]

This is an amazing story, and you should make more like this.

But I think you should make one when the narrator is the animal you play as. That would be cool.

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Shadowking2006 [2015-11-16 20:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Long story but good

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RainpawProductions [2015-10-12 15:01:09 +0000 UTC]

I love it!! I like how you ended it, because in most creepypastas the character dies in the end but this one he's just kind of stalking her forever (that's how I interpreted it).   

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PINKIEPIESYAAAAAAAAY [2015-07-28 16:16:12 +0000 UTC]

   

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blueswirls1234 [2015-06-21 08:25:55 +0000 UTC]

Mind if i share this with my buddies? i will give you credit :3

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MiraLillyAJ In reply to blueswirls1234 [2015-06-21 13:34:15 +0000 UTC]

^^ Sure!

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blueswirls1234 In reply to MiraLillyAJ [2015-08-06 19:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay thanks, i'll make sure this becomes more views :3

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Shiniima [2015-05-26 02:15:57 +0000 UTC]

I will always read this awesome thing

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CookieKitty-Meow844 [2015-05-17 11:59:53 +0000 UTC]

now i have a fear of phones ;-;

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SilverForeginLight [2015-05-10 23:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Omg, this is so scary its awesome though great work!

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MiraLillyAJ In reply to SilverForeginLight [2015-05-11 00:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Tysm!!

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SkyKittenaj [2015-04-27 23:27:57 +0000 UTC]

You make the best creepypastas evar

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Ilovecat3434 [2015-04-18 22:22:31 +0000 UTC]

I don't find that many Animal Jam creepypastas good, but I'm actually quite impressed with this o.o''

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horsegirl1231 [2015-04-12 03:07:28 +0000 UTC]

oh god

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RandomDrawingJammer [2015-04-10 19:23:45 +0000 UTC]

i was too scared to move XD

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DarkAJlpscreepypasta [2015-04-05 00:26:47 +0000 UTC]

THIS. IS. THE. BEST. CREEPYPASTA. EVER!

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Frog-Teeth [2015-04-03 21:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god. This is the creepiest thing I've EVER read. Oh god... o.o

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Tallstarwarrior4 [2015-03-20 21:55:08 +0000 UTC]

.

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XxDragonWarrior360xX [2015-03-20 06:32:07 +0000 UTC]

When I kept reading the watching us part I actually felt like I was being watched O,O isn't that a bit creepy? But anyway good creepypasta keep up the good work or should I say art X3 btw I was reading this at night but with the lights on.

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Xxvictinixx [2015-02-08 15:39:43 +0000 UTC]

The icon turned sad

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Fluff-Pal28 [2015-02-08 04:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me or do I see an eye in the bush on the right?

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DipperPines4607 [2015-02-06 02:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Did this actually happen :scared:

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MiraLillyAJ In reply to DipperPines4607 [2015-04-30 16:00:30 +0000 UTC]

No! Don't worry.

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DipperPines4607 In reply to MiraLillyAJ [2015-04-30 20:25:04 +0000 UTC]

oh ok cause those always get me

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Ravenheartxx [2015-01-26 01:31:35 +0000 UTC]

O,O :: runs to animal jam :: Nothing. :: writes in note book :: NEVER GO TO BAKOY , NEVER EVER HACK!     

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NyeusiUsikuSiri In reply to Ravenheartxx [2015-02-03 17:11:00 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree. So... scary.

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horsegirl1231 [2015-01-17 22:33:10 +0000 UTC]

ermahgerd
this reminds me of an ID episode...
e,e

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GoldstarXD [2015-01-01 19:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Interesting creepypasta! I like it. But it doesn't scare me one bit.

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PurrpleTiger [2014-12-16 02:30:12 +0000 UTC]

lol it doesnt scare me at all i have seen some disturbing things worse than a guy about to kill u much worse I WISH I NEVER LOOKED AT THOS THINGS

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mylittlepony123458 [2014-12-15 01:03:25 +0000 UTC]

My friends are offline too! Except for one T-T
So I feel or pain

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CreepyWarriorPony [2014-12-14 18:59:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm spooked out now... 0-0

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Criimson-Rose [2014-12-13 22:07:41 +0000 UTC]

o.O scary

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notacitychic [2014-11-11 17:59:15 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG PLZ TELL ME U MADE THIS STORY UP

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MiraLillyAJ In reply to notacitychic [2015-04-30 16:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Yes xD Don't worry! Sorry for VERY late comment.

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badooshk [2014-10-18 18:21:25 +0000 UTC]

*goes and huddles in a corner and throws away all my halloween masks:

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ThePhantomArtist2014 [2014-10-17 21:18:27 +0000 UTC]

omg…. SO SCARY! HOW DID U DEW IT!  

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TogetickloversNEwPlc [2014-09-10 22:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh that's scary ;-;


Can I ask how you got an AJ picture into DA Muro?

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GoldstarXD In reply to TogetickloversNEwPlc [2015-01-01 19:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Screeenshot, go on a art program, do Ctrl+V or Command+V, crop it so it only shows the aj screen, save it, name it, go onto DeviantArt muro and upload the file. Done.

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xxxHUSKYPUPxxx [2014-08-18 11:13:27 +0000 UTC]

When do you have time to think of this stuff?

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MiraLillyAJ In reply to xxxHUSKYPUPxxx [2014-08-18 16:27:43 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea 

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xxxHUSKYPUPxxx In reply to MiraLillyAJ [2014-08-20 11:11:19 +0000 UTC]

lol

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DarkenedGroves [2014-08-17 17:37:29 +0000 UTC]

...~processing~ Just...Whoah...I...Don'tknowwhattosayaboutthis...

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