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Published: 2013-07-08 15:06:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 390; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 3
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well, this is supposed to be elie from rave master xDa request for !!!
from her fanfict.
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Binary-Ink [2013-07-08 15:23:55 +0000 UTC]
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The way that you have used a different coloured outline is good, it creates impact onto the darker inner-lines of the hair and it gives a softer look to the shirt and skin tones than a black one would.
The sculpture of the hair is good because it flicks in realistic places and has the correct amount of volume for the drawing.
rather than using a grey to shade over red, a darker red or brown would be better, if you observe the way that a colour goes when it is in a darker place then you will notice that the colour deepens until it reaches black, and doesn't go grey. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Miranduless In reply to Binary-Ink [2013-07-19 16:43:43 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!
awesome critique!
sorry i didn't see it!
i don't know why!
but awesome layout!
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Binary-Ink In reply to Miranduless [2013-07-19 17:29:34 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I hope it helps.
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YurudanT [2013-07-08 18:42:24 +0000 UTC]
Why is she tied up and awesome hair (āā½ā)āŖ
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Miranduless In reply to YurudanT [2013-07-08 18:48:08 +0000 UTC]
wiiii!! thanks!!
i think she was kidnaped, i'm not sure....
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Miranduless In reply to jjmaster1224 [2013-07-08 15:14:43 +0000 UTC]
wiiiiiiiiiii!!
thanks!!!!!
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