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Published: 2009-01-07 13:05:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 51299; Favourites: 2140; Downloads: 0
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Description A happy new year and thank you for the 60-something K PVs, everyone! Hopefully I can whip some kiriban up soon. Sorry for the long inertia, been out for the holidays plus a week of flu. Also, thank you to =kokoed for the subscription, your OC is on its way.

If there was anything left unmarked by the arrows of Hoori, the god of hunting, it’s the swift swans of Takamagahara, or the godly plane. Created by Tsuki-yomi, the god of the moon, the swans have almost translucent, paperlike feathers that glow like ember in moonlight, shines like jade in starlight, and burns like fire in sunlight. As they were of godly origin and therefore sacred, no creature in heaven or earth is allowed to hunt them, a policy that is against Hoori’s very nature. He devised a plan and went to the river where the swans reside, politely asking their king, Inkoku, for a friendly race. Inkoku has lived long and is wise of the intentions of gods and men, and had known that Hoori would purposely fall behind in the race to aim his arrows without being seen.

Inkoku agreed given the time of the race would be to his liking, and chose dusk as the moon has yet to rise and the stars have yet to appear, save for the already sunken sun so that the swans’ feathers would be dull and translucent like the air and in turn escape Hoori’s exceptionally keen eyes. To Inkoku’s dismay, however, on the day of the race Hoori brought with him the three celestial light of the Sun, Moon, and Stars inside stolen paper lanterns that belonged to Amaterasu, the sun goddess and also the hunting god’s great-grandmother. The race started and the three lanterns illuminated the way, making the swans shimmer and shine against the darkening sky.

Nearly halfway through the race, Hoori pretended to lag behind, giving the swans the lead and carefully started to draw his first arrow. But with a single flap of his wings Inkoku slowed down drastically, his flock doing the like, and the very moment before Hoori released his first arrow he found himself at the lead with the swans behind him. Hastily he lowered his bow in embarrassment and pretended to pick up speed, the swans following closely, and later fell behind for the second time. But the swans quickly fell behind him again and then he had to pick up his pace once more and the entire process would begin again. The race progressed so slowly that it lasted all through the night, ending at dawn when the swans’ feathers again became dull and Hoori’s lanterns finally went out, giving Inkoku and his flock the edge they needed. With this they sped on and escaped Hoori, thus winning the race and saved from the fate of death.

The next year Hoori used his defeat as an excuse and called for a rematch, but the swans beat him every time until this became an annual event. Look up to the sky just before sunrise at the fall equinox’s last day and you may see Hoori and the swans floating across the dawning sky or gliding just above the land on the last leg of their slow race, with fireflies as onlookers. But comely as he may be, try not to stare at Hoori—embarrassment might force him to again lower his bow and miss his last shot of that year.

Takamagahara, Hoori, Tsuki-yomi, and Amaterasu really do exist in Japanese mythology. The swans, race, lanterns, fireflies, and Hoori’s mount/falcon are fictional. Thanks to =p0p5 for his inputs because not only am I value blind, I’m also color blind. And well, most of the time just blind.

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Comments: 291

LASAHIDO In reply to ??? [2009-01-09 02:44:15 +0000 UTC]

sama2 mba.

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Mogu In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 15:18:27 +0000 UTC]

anjred min keren abis

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MischievousMartian In reply to Mogu [2009-01-08 04:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Makasih brader! :>

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Chepita In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 15:17:19 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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MischievousMartian In reply to Chepita [2009-01-08 04:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Chepita In reply to MischievousMartian [2009-01-08 12:43:08 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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Lieur In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 15:11:11 +0000 UTC]

busseeetttt

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MischievousMartian In reply to Lieur [2009-01-08 04:46:02 +0000 UTC]

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inthename In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 15:07:14 +0000 UTC]

So unique and beautiful!!! Fabulous working!

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MischievousMartian In reply to inthename [2009-01-08 04:45:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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inthename In reply to MischievousMartian [2009-01-09 03:15:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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MadameGiry In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 14:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful colors and composition!

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MischievousMartian In reply to MadameGiry [2009-01-08 04:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like 'em, thanks!

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hoyhoykung In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 14:50:27 +0000 UTC]

oh my ............. very very beautiful

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MischievousMartian In reply to hoyhoykung [2009-01-08 04:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, glad you like it, it's an honor. Thanks! :>

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wantedwaifus In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 14:44:03 +0000 UTC]

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artfreakguy In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 14:11:14 +0000 UTC]

At first looking at it was a bit confusing but now, looking back at it after reading its story,...it makes a lot of sense and gives it more meaning...and thus makes me stare at it

Great piece by the way

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MischievousMartian In reply to artfreakguy [2009-01-08 04:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, sorry for the long writing Glad you like, thanks!

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Decarabia69 In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 14:05:23 +0000 UTC]

This is an absolutely captivating tale and the work exemplifies it so well with the beautiful colors and the suggestion of rapid motion.

Very nicely done!

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MischievousMartian In reply to Decarabia69 [2009-01-08 04:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Much obliged. Thanks for dropping by! :>

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Decarabia69 In reply to MischievousMartian [2009-01-08 05:52:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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TedKimArt In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 13:29:24 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous!

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MischievousMartian In reply to TedKimArt [2009-01-08 04:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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plue In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 13:29:21 +0000 UTC]

FINALLLY! setelah..berapa lama min, ngitung jari,9bulan ya? hehehe..manteb puoll, mabok aku, terlalu sadis lo menghajar anak2 disini

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plue In reply to plue [2009-01-07 13:34:27 +0000 UTC]

gw serasa ditampar tampar, manteb, 5 jempol!

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MischievousMartian In reply to plue [2009-01-08 04:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Udah lala banget trus jadinya gini aje ya? Hahaha, udah ampir staun mstinya gw dah bisa bikin 1 buku artiwork tu

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plue In reply to MischievousMartian [2009-01-08 06:00:28 +0000 UTC]

hushhh... ga bolee banyak slacking min, sanah maen monsterhunternya..kasian uda ga dimaenin...kehkehkeh

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MischievousMartian In reply to plue [2009-01-08 08:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Abis hanternya yang satu PSPnya ancur, satunya sibuk maen Prince of Persia... ;_;

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plue In reply to MischievousMartian [2009-01-08 14:31:24 +0000 UTC]

sweirusaaannn?

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MischievousMartian In reply to plue [2009-01-09 04:12:55 +0000 UTC]

Kapan sih gw boong...

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2ngaw In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 13:26:12 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! The colors are freaky! Everything here is just great!!! Just WOW, Yas! WOOOOW!

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MischievousMartian In reply to 2ngaw [2009-01-08 04:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you oh Master of superfabulicious linework, thank you!

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2ngaw In reply to MischievousMartian [2009-01-08 06:26:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Lookitthisgirl... my jaw really dropped when I saw this. I especially love the dragon!

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OhAnneli In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 13:24:21 +0000 UTC]

agh you blow me away.........

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MischievousMartian In reply to OhAnneli [2009-01-08 04:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Good to know. Thanks!

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whoiszid In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 13:20:13 +0000 UTC]

*Mindfucked*

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MischievousMartian In reply to whoiszid [2009-01-08 04:40:43 +0000 UTC]

After almost a year of half-assed work, Z. Almost a whole effing year.

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DioMahesa In reply to ??? [2009-01-07 13:06:45 +0000 UTC]

awesome...

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MischievousMartian In reply to DioMahesa [2009-01-08 04:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Makasih!

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DioMahesa In reply to MischievousMartian [2009-01-08 04:40:28 +0000 UTC]

sama2...

very inspiring!

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