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Published: 2019-04-30 21:32:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 7232; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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press the start button -


the thing about people like you is

all these little coffin nails

bring the taste of red

to this wasteland love.


i saw right through it

but it wasn't you,

a disappearing act,

mathematics of the heart -


and i never wounded you, but

dreams &

feelings

still be sinking, &

they bleed ink.


for what it's worth, these

are easy tears,

this is where i want to be -

spot the lie, i'm a liar.


it stinks like rotten fruit.


a hill to live on,

a zoo of mistakes,

a little too familiar of a break,

just a romantic trying to do forensics.



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Comments: 26

xlntwtch [2019-06-19 18:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Great use of phrases in this "title" poem - smooth and effective.

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miserabel In reply to xlntwtch [2019-06-25 12:48:39 +0000 UTC]

That's the best kind of compliment for this form! Thank you

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XxFlameFrost101xX [2019-05-01 19:49:42 +0000 UTC]

oh this is such a clever idea! love itΒ 

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dialtonepoetry [2019-05-01 19:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Such an interesting idea! Great job!Β 

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Gilly-nayeli [2019-05-01 15:59:32 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe [2019-05-01 15:07:38 +0000 UTC]

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kuku88 [2019-05-01 08:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Dude this is amazing!! I love how it flows and how you incorporated so many of the community with it still making so much sense and carrying such vivid imagery.
Thank you so much for including me! Makes me aspire for my titles to be more creative and interesting in the future ahaha.

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miserabel In reply to kuku88 [2019-05-01 14:59:04 +0000 UTC]

And thank you for this comment! Yes, that's honestly my favourite part about title poetry, it makes me want to have more creative and interesting titles as well!

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SubjugatedSandwich [2019-05-01 07:22:21 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool! I didn't even know this was a thing. Thank you for the inclusion.

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miserabel In reply to SubjugatedSandwich [2019-05-01 14:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Now you know... you should do your own and you're very welcome of course!

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hypermagical [2019-05-01 04:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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miserabel In reply to hypermagical [2019-05-01 14:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Very true. And thank you

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MysticalPoet [2019-05-01 03:40:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm so pleased that you mentioned, and incorporated the title of my poem in this piece!Β  Β 
Also, the poem is wonderful

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miserabel In reply to MysticalPoet [2019-05-01 14:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thank you for leaving this comment

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Tiger--eyes [2019-05-01 01:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Lovely!

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miserabel In reply to Tiger--eyes [2019-05-01 14:56:34 +0000 UTC]

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twelvedaysofjune [2019-05-01 01:08:07 +0000 UTC]

this is so neat!
i'm honored you used some of mine <3

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miserabel In reply to twelvedaysofjune [2019-05-01 14:56:14 +0000 UTC]

You did get a place of honor in this piece I'm glad you approve!

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StarryStarrySky7267 [2019-05-01 00:52:51 +0000 UTC]

oh wow this is amazing <3 thank you for including my pieces, it has been a pleasure reading your work! <3

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miserabel In reply to StarryStarrySky7267 [2019-05-01 14:55:48 +0000 UTC]

and thank you very much, too!

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xfuture-boundx [2019-04-30 23:57:11 +0000 UTC]

ahh omg thanks for including me <3 this is really cool

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miserabel In reply to xfuture-boundx [2019-05-01 14:55:29 +0000 UTC]

your titles are also really cool!

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xfuture-boundx In reply to miserabel [2019-05-01 15:15:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you! i try really hard on them so that means a lot

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MaggotsX [2019-04-30 23:45:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm very honored to be included in this (even though you didn't like my "stanks". Lol.) This is a great community piece, as well as a great piece in general. Thanks for the inclusion.

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miserabel In reply to MaggotsX [2019-05-01 14:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha, oh no! You're welcome, thank you for the creative title, couldn't have done it without you guys even if I didn't like the "stanks"...

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psto1464 [2019-04-30 21:43:05 +0000 UTC]

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miserabel In reply to psto1464 [2019-05-01 14:24:16 +0000 UTC]

It did indeed! Thank you

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