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MiserableFish — Cusp
Published: 2009-06-12 11:47:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description What ever world it is said to be,
Its not meant for people like me.
I see self through the eyes of a glass,
and everybody is stuck to the past.
Some things change the way you think
Some incidents change the way you are.



I used to think nothing would take me far,
Just like a butterfly stuck in a transparent jar.



Someone I could blame my mistakes on.
Someone who would carry the burden I'm under.
Someone who would live my life.
Someone who would die every moment.

You talking about oceans and rivers
I drowned in my own tears.
But I couldn't have drowned
'cause am still breathing
Maybe death isn't a ceased heart
Its more like staled eyes
and rotten brain.


Red.
Black.
Red.
Dead.
Slack.
Dead.
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Comments: 6

ksmsoccer89 [2009-06-13 18:20:10 +0000 UTC]

hmm this is very interesting,
powerful. lots of emotion. i love the first stanza and the little 2 lines right after it.

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MiserableFish In reply to ksmsoccer89 [2009-06-14 07:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
It sucks I know, but I wrote this to let a bit of frustation out. =[

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ksmsoccer89 In reply to MiserableFish [2009-06-14 17:57:14 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome.
and no it doesnt suck. sorry youre so frustrated.

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69tea [2009-06-12 11:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Incoherence isn't always a bad thing.

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MiserableFish In reply to 69tea [2009-06-12 11:55:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm disturbed to an extent that I dint even bother reading it again. Just wrote it and uploaded it. Scarp work.
And fuck life.

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69tea In reply to MiserableFish [2009-06-12 12:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Things'll get better. I know it probably doesn't seem that was now but they will. Write some more stuff if you feel down and if you ever want to talk you're always welcome to comment or send notes or whatever.

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