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Published: 2014-04-13 10:58:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 783; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Jelsa, yeah.....Because I love them now....
I think they are really cute together and I was kinda sad Elsa didn't get a man in Frozen.... so, I think Jack Frost is the perfect man for her!
I didn't do anything digital in 4 moths! I'm so glad I'm still fast in the lineart...
But, I need to improve more!
I wanted to try need Technics, but since I'm using the mouse the Technics I can use are limited.....
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> Solid anatomy. Jack's slightly bulkier frame and Elsa's smaller frame are well done.
> Solid lineart. Clean, smooth and the clothing folds are adequately accounted for. Well done
> Sameface. Elsa and Jack look a little too much alike. Clues are the eyes, chin and cheeks. Skin tone as well.
> Ambiguous lighting. The shading feels a little over the place, with no indication on where the light source is. If there are multiple light sources, the shading does not reflect that.
>Try not to crop the frame too much. You could have added a bit more inches from the top to show the rest of Jack's hair or a few inches from the bottom to show Jack's hands.
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Wonderful, please keep this up. It's certainly much better than those Jack/Hiccup pics.
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Thank you!
I really don't like crossovers much, this is maybe the only one that I love xD
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Of course, you're so welcome. 
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