SilverInkblot [2016-01-05 23:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. I never would have thought to try anything like this, but I could see someone doing something really amazing with the concept. I particularly like the little touch of the titles in each new box; I probably wouldn't have thought to change those had I done this

Usually, I'm big on things like punctuation, but I can forgive the absence of structure here as this is pretty clearly a stream-of-consciousness sort of thing. The title is very fitting in that regard I find the second box to be the best read of the four - the first is a little too repetitive and the others are a bit too short of bite into. As a whole though, the four work well together while still being their own separate sets of thought.

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scheherazades [2014-11-26 21:52:17 +0000 UTC]

this is so on point and sad and excellent and i adore it 
i remember that i screenshotted it when i first read it in august on my tablet and never commented and i don't know why

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IceColdNormal [2014-08-28 14:05:09 +0000 UTC]

mirrors what runs through my head constantly. 

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