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mistsofavalon4ever — bold encounter by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-03-09 23:59:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 239; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I was sitting on a train
On that cold November night
Rain streaking across the windows,
Coffee cupped in my hand,
My head trembled at
Every particular bump

Too paperback novel
To even be real,
But it was-
It really was

You asked if the
Seat across from me
Was taken.

The empty seat
Across from me,
When there were entire tables
Completely unoccupied

I said it was not.
You took it
And asked what
I was reading

"A book about a karass,
Lives that are unexplainably
Intertwined,
Lives that keeping
Meeting each other."

How ironic.

You asked,
"Anything else
You'd like to teach me?"

I replied,
"Sure.
Follow me."

We went down the
Stairs to the
Dining car,
Then farther.
The lower we went,
The bumpier it became.
We had to hold on to
Each other to keep
From stumbling.

I opened the door
To the dressing room,
Slammed it shut,
And locked it

"Do you know
What this is?"
I asked intently.

"A…
Dressing room?"

"This is where all
The secrets are kept.
This is where the ticket less
Felons change identities.
This is where unfaithful wives
Cover up their
Recently acquired hickies
And fix their kiss-smudged
Lipstick."

He boldly puts his hands
On my hips,
Pulls me close.

"Are we one of
The secrets?
Will we continue
This history,
This legacy
You speak of?"

I push him onto
The plush,
Femininely embellished couch
And wrap both my legs
Around his hips.
Straddle is the world,
But it's more than that:
Total dominance.

"We already are."
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Comments: 19

saykha [2010-03-12 20:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that sounds like a fascinating dream. It reminds me of a carnival, but I guess it might just be the dressing room thingy that did that. Really well written

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to saykha [2010-03-12 23:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Carnivals are fun, but I hate circuses because of how badly they treat the animals and the people in the "freak show"
Thank you

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saykha In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-13 08:35:18 +0000 UTC]

I've never been to a circus but I can imagine that some circuses would do that ... it's really sad actually, a circus is a place to have fun

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CrimsonSeijun0 [2010-03-10 04:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Love the 'Tudors touch' as it were. Great work on the poem.

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2010-03-10 05:07:53 +0000 UTC]

There is actually a scene where she straddles him(clothed, don't worry), but I couldn't find the screenshot. Oh well, glad you think it fits
And thanks

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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-10 05:21:47 +0000 UTC]

I know that scene...I liked it.
~No perverted intention~ ^^

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2010-03-10 23:36:07 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah I did too ^^

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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-11 00:12:43 +0000 UTC]

lol Amazing...ya know, I love you more now than I did already hahaha

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2010-03-11 01:13:52 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-11 13:27:01 +0000 UTC]

yep, well thank you for the beautiful work that you produce....honestly, you're truly something else ^^

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2010-03-12 00:13:39 +0000 UTC]

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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-16 22:23:35 +0000 UTC]

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2010-03-16 23:39:04 +0000 UTC]

Erm...

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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-18 18:30:10 +0000 UTC]

HAhaha gomen, gomen. Just wanted to see your reaction to that lol

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to CrimsonSeijun0 [2010-03-18 22:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Ha it's fine, was just a bit off lol

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CrimsonSeijun0 In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-18 22:59:09 +0000 UTC]

lol I understand ha

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fiction-freak [2010-03-10 03:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I really like the scene where she's (your?) telling him about what goes on in the dressing room.
Brilliant job!

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to fiction-freak [2010-03-10 04:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Tee hee. The dressing room...thanks.

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fiction-freak In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-03-10 05:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Any time

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