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mistsofavalon4ever — repent by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-06-29 03:18:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 264; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description my lips are cracked and dry
i am open and
do not put the weight of your world on me
can't you see i can
barely handle my own?

"do you ever show
any emotion?"

of course i do, mother
you've seen it
and i am sick and tired of
your bullshit amnesia

our tragedy was
written in the stars,
a tearstained constellation,
to be sure

you lost your love
and i came to replace it
to be the salve to
your wounds

well, congragulations:
you've cut me open
far too much for me to be able
to heal the rest of you myself

isn't the irony
fantastically cruel?

doesn't the Lord
laugh upon us from
His kingdom in the sky?

you may say he cares, mother,
i say:
"fuck you, sir.
fuck you for everything
you have
and will
sic on me."

some truths are worth
burning for
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Comments: 6

fiction-freak [2010-07-15 11:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! The passion and word choice made me stop and re-read it.

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to fiction-freak [2010-07-15 15:13:04 +0000 UTC]

oooo a reread is a big compliment cool

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fiction-freak In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-07-15 23:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Well I'm glad then

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BleedingStupidity [2010-06-29 05:31:08 +0000 UTC]

you have a typo in the first line.
But besides that...

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to BleedingStupidity [2010-06-29 20:27:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i fixed it

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BleedingStupidity In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-06-29 20:27:59 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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