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Published: 2010-02-15 21:02:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 320; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 6
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Description
PromisesNeither of us will
Be able
To keep
String us together
Words unspoken
Break us
I am not
An angel
Far from it.
I am not a blank canvas
For you to splash your
Pain over
I am already
Streaked with grey,
Just not in the way
That's most important
To you and every other
Evangelist
I am the shirt
Left behind in the
Hotel room
I am the girl
That slides her already
Numb fingers down
The rain-streaked window
I am the duckling
Who burrows into the other
Birds' nest
I am the one
Who can't grow up,
My teacups chipped,
My gowns in tatters
I am the one who
Hides in the woods,
Secretly hoping
To be found
I am the best friend,
The psychologist
And I am rarely
happy
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Comments: 14
Well, thank you.
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You are very welcome
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We all feel this way at one stage or another. It's sad but true.
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Excellent visual imagery, check
"That slides he already
Numb fingers down" for typo though.
Line confused me till I realized,
"he" was "the"
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aaah. Ooops. That's embarassing. *fixes*
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Ah it's all good I submitted something from years back and AFTER I submitted, someone pointed out a typo, then I found another part that needed fixing. I was frustrated with myself just a little, lol.
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lol ok I feel better now ^^ I'm horrible at proofreading my own stuff, but for some reason am excellent when I do for other people
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So do I. The music video's wicked and trippy as well.
Thanks
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this is so real. so down to earth and i think every girl can relate.
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