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MistyEyedDreamer — Defeated

Published: 2006-12-18 20:31:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 547; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 12
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Description so as i sit here
defeated once again
i look up at you
and softly whisper
"i'd rather it end this way..."
and as your eyes misted
i saw you hesitate
and i felt a moment of relief
and a moment of regret
i thought to myself
just end it now...
but then you walked away...

something a wrote and when i saw the models i had to make a picture to go with that poem and that picture so anyway yea...thankz to the following:

tree: [link]
models: [link]
background: [link]
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Comments: 24

offisgreat [2007-12-30 08:26:48 +0000 UTC]

That's cool!! I love it. It's like a movie.

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night-fate-stock [2006-12-20 00:29:48 +0000 UTC]

awesome work

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to night-fate-stock [2006-12-20 03:43:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Homewrecker-Stock [2006-12-19 03:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for using my stock! I love this pic

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to Homewrecker-Stock [2006-12-19 20:45:30 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome
i'm glad you do
thank you for the !

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MerlinsMoonShadow [2006-12-18 22:56:50 +0000 UTC]

It looks beautiful ! Thank you so much for using our stock . The poem makes it perfect, I almost got misty eyed .

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to MerlinsMoonShadow [2006-12-19 01:27:26 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad you like it! you're welcome thankz again for the picture retake!
seriously? =O.o=

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Tsutsuku-chan [2006-12-18 22:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Ooh it really goes with the pic ^^ I like it~!

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to Tsutsuku-chan [2006-12-19 01:26:04 +0000 UTC]

yay! i'm glad thankz!

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LoveLiesBleeding2 [2006-12-18 22:22:10 +0000 UTC]

woo...i like the slightly faded look it had...like the picture itself is showing despair. and i like that they're behind the three XD is that weird?

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to LoveLiesBleeding2 [2006-12-19 01:25:54 +0000 UTC]

lol no and i'm glad you noticed the fadedness!
and nah i like it too but...i'm weird...

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LoveLiesBleeding2 In reply to MistyEyedDreamer [2006-12-19 03:49:21 +0000 UTC]

lol! we're all weird here, methinks

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to LoveLiesBleeding2 [2006-12-19 20:45:11 +0000 UTC]

most definately!!

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runawayfreaker [2006-12-18 21:37:16 +0000 UTC]

Very good... I can still tell it's a manipulation, but overall, very good... Something about the tree needs changing...

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to runawayfreaker [2006-12-18 21:44:35 +0000 UTC]

yea i know.....maybe the blurry edges?
what else do you think i could fix?

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runawayfreaker In reply to MistyEyedDreamer [2006-12-19 01:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Also, looking back at the original images, GREAT job blending them. My artsy side can still tell it's a manipulation, but it's SOOO close to looking natural. Shadows and brightness/contrast play a large part in how you merge two images...

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to runawayfreaker [2006-12-19 20:44:57 +0000 UTC]

okay...i'll play around with that...but i'm getting better?

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runawayfreaker In reply to MistyEyedDreamer [2006-12-19 21:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to runawayfreaker [2006-12-19 23:27:10 +0000 UTC]

yay

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runawayfreaker In reply to MistyEyedDreamer [2006-12-19 01:32:03 +0000 UTC]

That's part of it... it's lighter than the background, just darken it a little... the same goes for the two people... granted, the brightness of the people makes it high contrast and is kinda good, but try to up the contrast on the two people, so that they have darker darks and whiter whites... that might help...

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greenfroggiesstock [2006-12-18 20:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Lovely manip, I like the way you added the foreground tree and made it all the more realistic Maybe a little more darkness on the dark-dressed girls hair would add to the realism? Of course I'm just being overly picky there!

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to greenfroggiesstock [2006-12-18 20:39:35 +0000 UTC]

lol maybe i might do that later...but i've got to go to a party in a few minutes...so hopefully i'll remember...thankz btw

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greenfroggiesstock In reply to MistyEyedDreamer [2006-12-19 13:07:12 +0000 UTC]

hope you had fun!

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MistyEyedDreamer In reply to greenfroggiesstock [2006-12-19 20:44:03 +0000 UTC]

eh it was okay...

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