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Mitch-el — Hoops - Ch. 1, Pg. 1b

Published: 2008-06-11 20:18:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1209; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 39
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Description After much evaluation, JoJo silently pronounced the object satisfactory, and deposited it in his pocket. It wasn't long before his steps towards his bedroom window were glued firm by a nearby "clinking" sound which came from the hallway....

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Here is page two -- or, 1b, rather -- of the "Hoops" comic. This thing sure looked a lot better in my sketchbook.... (snigger)

Obviously, this is the moment in the film (Horton Hears a Who!) where JoJo makes for the abandoned observatory before being stopped suddenly by a water-carrying Ned. I just decided to play with the scene a bit; plus, that little do-hickey that JoJo put inside his pocket will come in handy later on.

Advanced critique is greatly appreciated.

-- Mitch

Page 1 ----> [link]

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Tools:

- 4H/2H/H/B/HB/4B pencils (black)
- Erasers
- Ruler
- Pen/Marker (black)
- Photoshop CS2 (used to darken, enhance, and cleanse image and background)

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JoJo is the property of Blue Sky Studios.
"Horton Hears a Who!", the film adaption, is © Blue Sky Studios.
"Horton Hears a Who!", the book, is © Dr. Seuss.
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Comments: 19

PeacexNaruto [2008-10-24 16:28:36 +0000 UTC]

haha, this comic is rather interesting! i hope you keep it up! *is a bit addicted to JoJo actually XDD* you could work a bit on the proportion *although nothing is very proportion-alized in WhoVille* otherwise, i love this small comic you're working on

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Mitch-el In reply to PeacexNaruto [2008-10-24 20:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you very much! I really should complete the series, as development on the comic itself has reached a bit of a roadblock. Nevertheless, thanks again for the comment and critique! I appreciate it.

-- Mitch

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PeacexNaruto In reply to Mitch-el [2008-10-25 13:36:21 +0000 UTC]

a roadblock? well, you could look around, or maybe watch the movie again to get ideas. otherwise, i'm loving it for some reason XD

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Mitch-el In reply to PeacexNaruto [2008-10-25 17:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. Yeah, I could do that. When the film comes out on DVD in the U.S. then I'll definitely use it as a reference for ideas.

Thanks, again!

-- Mitch

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softballchick94 [2008-06-13 03:57:19 +0000 UTC]

I love it Keep it up!

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Mitch-el In reply to softballchick94 [2008-06-13 16:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

-- Mitch

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softballchick94 In reply to Mitch-el [2008-06-13 22:43:03 +0000 UTC]

NO PRoblemo!

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lambcaey [2008-06-12 21:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, where's page three?

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Mitch-el In reply to lambcaey [2008-06-13 01:09:47 +0000 UTC]

Page three (or page two actually, since this is only the second and final installment of page one) has not yet been completed. In fact, I haven't even started drawing it yet. (heheh)

It may be a while before I continue on with the comic, since I have other, more important things on my "To Do" list.

-- Mitch

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lambcaey In reply to Mitch-el [2008-06-13 09:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Ok. There's no rush, I was just interested.

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Mitch-el In reply to lambcaey [2008-06-13 16:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. No problem.

-- Mitch

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sharkie19 [2008-06-12 00:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Ooo, I love it, pannels 1 and 3 most of all. I'm a bit unsure of what he's doing in the fourth one though.

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Mitch-el In reply to sharkie19 [2008-06-12 03:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, I completely messed up on the fourth panel. He's supposed to be placing the "mysterious object" into his "pocket", but, alas, it looks like he's slapping himself on the butt instead. I'm gonna work on pockets more....

Thanks for the comments and critique, sharpie!

-- Mitch

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Peace-love-frogs [2008-06-11 23:59:30 +0000 UTC]

awwww, how cute! i cannot wait to see what happens

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Mitch-el In reply to Peace-love-frogs [2008-06-12 03:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Ha-ha. Thanks!

-- Mitch

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Peace-love-frogs In reply to Mitch-el [2008-06-12 14:08:47 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome!

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Snowy-owl900 [2008-06-11 21:20:30 +0000 UTC]

sweet.

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Mitch-el In reply to Snowy-owl900 [2008-06-11 22:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

-- Mitch

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Snowy-owl900 In reply to Mitch-el [2008-06-12 01:24:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, Mitchy.

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