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Miyukabob — Finn Adventure Time
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good job on capturing the shape of the face, but his right eye is drooping a bit. nice job
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Thank you for your feedback
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Heyo, I'm from Project Comment! I hope you like what I have to say ^^
I have to say, I'm a huge fan of your skin shading. It's so bright and vibrant. It just makes this look so nice. The vibe is almost dreamy, with the white background and colors of the character clashing. I believe my favorite parts of this are the eyes and the nose. I've always loved how people draw noses like that and yours is spot on. The best part about the eyes is probably their color, and the almost calm or tired look in them. They're super pretty!
A few things that you may want to work on is your line art. So you could clean it up a bit and make your lines less sketchy and messy, though of course if that's your style then I understand. It's just a suggestion. Another thing is that the left eye is slightly smaller than the right one, making it look like he's turned a little bit. In the future I suggest maybe just doing a copy and paste over which eye you like the best, then flipping it to the other side so that they can be proportionately the same size. The last thing is that you may want to put a few wrinkles in the shirt and shade it more, just for details sake. I hope you like what I had to say and that is wasn't too harsh! I'll look forward to seeing what you do in the future~ ^^
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Thank you so much for the awesome critique! I totally get where you are coming from with the line art. I wanted to look like a neat sketch, but then I just got lazy. Line art isn't my favorite step, but I really need to devote more time to it. As for the eye, I really like drawing asymmetrical faces, but again, I think it got out of hand. The left eye definitely needs to be proportioned right even if it is different from the other one if you know what I mean. Not surprisingly, I got lazy on the shirt. In the future, I need to spend more time on things and flesh them out fully. Anyway, I really appreciate your feedback and keep up with the great critiques
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Aw you're too sweet! You're very welcome! ^^
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Unlike a lot of humanizations of Finn, I could honestly believe that he looks like this! You did a great job of capturing his design and character in a believable way, and the facial construction is fantastic! Great job on this :3
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Thank you so much! I tried to make him look like a teen since he is in the show
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Hello friend! I'm from-->
First off, I'd like to say that this drawing is really cute! And you also made Finn look really handsome! He doesn't look completely like his original cartoon self, but he doesn't need to. Since I could spot this picture out of all the other ones in the group, and I could tell right away that this was indeed Finn. Nice job there!
I really like the shading, and Finn's eyes are really pretty to me! Probably my favorite part of the drawing I must admit.
Now, there are a few slight issues I see. They aren't terribly mean or anything! But I must criticize.
Well, I did say that I really like his eyes, but it's mostly just the color. I think that his right eye looks smaller than his left, and it also looks like you drew it higher than his left eye. This wouldn't be too big an issue if Finn's face was leaning slightly to the right, with his chin facing that direction. Then his right eye would look fine in it's position, because it would match the rest of his face in a way (if that makes sense.)
He also looks really tired or he looks like he's been crying, since it seems like you drew bags under his eyes, and I'm not sure if it was your intention to make it look like he's been crying or losing sleep, but that's what it looks like to me ha
I also noticed the red tint you added to his hat, and I'm not exactly sure why you added that there. It (in a way) looks like his hat is blushing, but again, I'm not sure if that was intentional or not.
Aside from those few things I noticed, I think you did a really good job! I saw a little bit more of your art and think you're very talented! So keep up the good work, friend!
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Thank you so much for the critique! I totally agree with you about the eyes. I draw them really quick and didn't fine tune them. As for the bags under the eyes, I have a habit of always drawing them, the red does make it look like he's been crying though. I just re-watched the episode where Flame Princess broke up with him so maybe that's why I'm not really sure why I added red to the hat either. Apparently I was just going crazy with the red when I drew this. Anyway, I really appreciate your advice and you weren't mean at all
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Oh, I gotcha!
You're very welcome for the critique!
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!so awesome, good work
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