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Published: 2013-04-22 00:18:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 15542; Favourites: 401; Downloads: 50
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One day, I was at work. And someone had a banter abour how regularly she emptied her fridge at home. Then there was this crack about mouldy food items saying your name when being inadvertently cultivated in one of the fridge compartments. I must admit, I had a real laugh with this one. I really wanted to punctuate the flow of the narrative primarily with Tails' facial expressions and the dialogue bounced around between himself and Sonic. Then I thought hey, why not throw in Christopher Thorndyke from Sonic X as an extra. A number of my strips have a pretty thick border round them, it seemed like a waste of space, so I thought I'd trim it down this time.I have a confession to make, I have been guilty of leaving the fridge unattended for long periods of time. On one occasion when I was studying at uni, something began to take root
Anyway, I have grown older and wiser and will never play god again
It is up to you to decide what is scarier. finding something alive in the fridge, or Chris Thorndyke lurking otside your house
Tails belongs to "Sega", Christopher Thorndyke is property of "for kids".
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DeathEXEIsHere In reply to ??? [2024-07-17 01:08:27 +0000 UTC]
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MidnightDarkness1 [2014-05-20 11:48:28 +0000 UTC]
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I love this comic. The funny part of the whole comic was indeed the facial expressions. Especially Chris's! Omg! That just bout made me die! My f favorite quote is "And I thought Chris Thorndyke was weird." And the detail of this picture is absolutely perfect! I almost thought I was in the vegetable tion of the fridge.............or the dairy. But, if I could do one thing with this picture, it would be I would post it on the news and say "If you can't top this, no one can!" And if I were to put a caption with this, it would read, "If you don't clean the fridge out regularly, this could happen to you!"
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to MidnightDarkness1 [2014-05-20 21:22:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the critique. I really appreciate the feedback! Remember, be careful with your foodstuffs. Treat your fridge with respect and it will treat you the same in return XD
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New-Atlas [2013-12-22 21:22:04 +0000 UTC]
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this is a very good one the righting it strong the art design is very good and the length of this comic is good even though there was no need for Chris to be in the background it gave each panel just that little more to look at witch gust makes it work even more for me I do like witch angles you used for this but for a comic this long I would of liked it to have more of an ending it mite be a comedic comic but there should be more of a pay of in the end but over all it is a very well made comic and I would like to thank you for sharing this with all the people of DA and I hope to see more stuff like this from you
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bluesnowblast [2013-05-27 23:17:28 +0000 UTC]
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This was simply AMAZING! Not to mention hilarious! There was so much detail put into this and made it realistic. I mean, with Chris in the background there doing those faces, hah!, I got the hiccups! It's almost like he's stalking Tails. OR IZ HE?! XD The old rotting food looks absolutely disgusting, y'know, in a good way. When I saw that shadow (lolz, a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/h/s⦠" alt=" " title="shadowthehedgehogplz" />), the first word that popped to mind was FOREBODIIIIIIIIIIIIIING before I read on. And don't get me started on Tails' face when he reacted to 'It'! GIT DA REACTOR! XD I give this 100 rings for detail, humor, plot, creativity, and SHININESS! No, really, it's shiny!
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to bluesnowblast [2013-05-28 21:19:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the very positive critique. I'm glad you noticed the detail in the panels. Oh yeah he's totally stalking, such a creep XD Thanks for all the stars too, this gives me a reason to work harder on my next strip!
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bluesnowblast In reply to MJWaiteDesign [2013-05-30 22:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Hey, anything for a good ROFL LOL, right? Keep it up!
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to bluesnowblast [2013-05-30 22:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh yes, the LOLS will keep coming! You have my word
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Deviant-Mobian6 [2013-04-26 21:54:11 +0000 UTC]
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I really enjoyed this piece of art i found well drawn original creepy, and just down right funny. i admired the creativity ,word play ,the artist's technique and as along with the funny facial expressions.i really don't know what else to type and i'm trying to reach the one hundred word minimum which is really hard to do without using a dictionary (which i do not own any at the time.)Anyways like i typed before i really did enjoy the piece of art i give this a thumbs up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Thumbs Up"/> oh my god i still haven't reached the minimum yet!? yes i just did Hallelujah!
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to Deviant-Mobian6 [2013-04-26 23:59:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique, it's the first I've had in a while from anyone. It's just screaming with positivity!
I really wanted to nail the facial expressions to punctuate the comedy and I'm happy with the result. Despite this and my own personal satisfaction, I do feel there is always room to improve in some way. Every artist is their own critic, it's a curse. I know what it's like to run out of things to say, so I can relate XD
Again, thanks for the critique and take care ^^
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Deviant-Mobian6 In reply to MJWaiteDesign [2013-05-18 23:46:13 +0000 UTC]
your welcome i really liked your art and i don't believe in being negative about art because hey no one's peferct im glad you enjoyed my critique sorry for the late response i hope i get to critique you again soon!
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to Deviant-Mobian6 [2013-05-20 01:58:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey, better late than never right? You'll get another chance to critique my work in the future, I can promise you that
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Deviant-Mobian6 In reply to MJWaiteDesign [2013-05-20 19:58:00 +0000 UTC]
thanks i'll be looking forward to it!
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to ShadedMystery [2017-01-15 04:30:53 +0000 UTC]
Just thank the lord he can't ge in the house XD
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Rainpelt100 [2016-12-17 16:57:20 +0000 UTC]
Finding something in the fridge is definitely one hundred times more terrifying.
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to Rainpelt100 [2016-12-23 01:48:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad someone thinks so XD
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to AidenUmbra [2015-04-04 18:46:04 +0000 UTC]
Yes, she was cultivated in a dirty refrigerator
I'm not sure if the same goes for all seedrians, but... now you know
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to Healmaster0927 [2014-12-12 22:07:42 +0000 UTC]
It's nice to see there are people out there who appreciate Chris Thorndyke XD
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Healmaster0927 In reply to thecrazyrandomfan [2014-12-13 16:07:09 +0000 UTC]
I think Amy needs a Burn Heal, She just got burned!
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RedBlueIsCool [2014-09-04 04:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Sonic is a creep in this one... and that made it hilarious.
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superchao101 [2014-08-06 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]
What you don't see is how you can see from in the fridge and I can answer that for you.
*opens tails Fridge*
Spy head: Kill me
NO! *slams door*
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xXEndlessDaydreamsXx [2014-06-06 20:45:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh lord I love this XD
And Chris in the background reminds me of a few Sonic Eggs pages XD Love it~
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Ms-Maggie [2014-05-27 21:27:20 +0000 UTC]
Chris the stalker WHAAAAAA Β RUN FOR THE HILLS!!!!! Β
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Ms-Maggie In reply to MJWaiteDesign [2014-05-30 02:35:34 +0000 UTC]
It's all people for themselves! XD
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to Ms-Maggie [2014-06-11 19:46:14 +0000 UTC]
AWW, but WHYYYYY? Now I'm stuck with ChrisΒ
How could you leave me? I feel so sad Β
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Ms-Maggie In reply to MJWaiteDesign [2014-06-11 20:12:38 +0000 UTC]
Like i said "it's all man for himself" X3
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to Ms-Maggie [2014-06-12 00:17:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh, okay... guess I'll jus-
Hey what's up?
PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!
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Ms-Maggie In reply to MJWaiteDesign [2014-06-12 01:20:20 +0000 UTC]
I'll get a chainsaw and be Jason!
*to Chris* Hey you! SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND !!!!!!
WOOOOOOO!!! I love this thing!
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FerbFletcher1234 In reply to Ms-Maggie [2014-08-09 14:05:50 +0000 UTC]
DIE CHRISTHORNDYKE DIE
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pokeygirl14 [2014-05-06 15:20:32 +0000 UTC]
beware the fridge freak of dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooom LOLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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pokeygirl14 In reply to MJWaiteDesign [2014-05-09 01:09:55 +0000 UTC]
lolz!!!! good 1 man
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-03-29 17:13:08 +0000 UTC]
What is you don't understand?
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MJWaiteDesign In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-03-29 17:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Do you mean the punchline "Quade, start the reactor?" It's a quote from the original Total Recall movie. The creature that originally said that line was a freakish looking mutant that told Arnold Schwarzenegger to start the reactor in order to give the surface of Mars a breathable atmosphere.
I hope the description can explain the whole point of the gag Β
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