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MLE-11 — 4th Dimentional Transitional
Published: 2009-09-26 01:26:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 599; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 17
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my camera recharger is lost, which means i can't get any new pictures on my compy, which means i can't submit anything new.but i did re-color this
i like it a little better now
textures from CGTextures <3
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The hand is very good! Here are a few problems I'll try to help with, though:
1. The thumb should be curved a little more, on its inner side (the side nearest to the index.)
2. The tip of the index finger shouldn't be angled upwards so much. It should stop about when it touches the thumb.
3. The folds of skin are a little too apparent here. They shouldn't be huge or connect directly to the thumb, but instead more subtle. (However, I commend you for noticing the folds at all! Most people forget them~)
4. The knuckles should be more protruding. See, you show that the index finger has a knuckle by the curve you add at the end, but all the other fingers have just flat lines leading to the base of the hand.
5. Flesh out the fingers themselves a little. I don't think they should change in size as suddenly as the tip of the middle finger does here.
As for the picture in its entirety, I really like it! The idea is cute and fun, and your execution makes it very interesting. I love the patterns especially. Great job~!
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wow thank you!
that was really helpful
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I'm glad! Keep working hard, lovely dear~
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this is really eyecatching! simple linework, but well executed!
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I like this one. Definitely what you call awesome.
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