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MLP-Silver-Quill — A Princess' Tears - Part 3
Published: 2013-03-30 06:49:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 104215; Favourites: 766; Downloads: 320
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<=Part 2 | Story's Start | Part 4 =>I'd like to quote Louis CK here:
Women are non-violent, but they will s*** inside of your heart.
Needed to take some time to put the focus on Twilight and her first taste of hesitation. I don't believe that she'll have to leave Ponyville or say goodbye to her friends. That would end the show.
But I want to see her dealing with the idea of that outcome. It'd be great character growth and add some development to this new direction for the show. Will I get to see this come season 4? Well... only half a year to go!
Thanks once again to my faithful viewers, watchers, and commentators. And thanks to the folks at Derpibooru who surprised me by largely supporting this comic and offering some constructive feedback.
And extra special thanks to whose Canterlot at Night helped set the stage moving forward. I couldn't have finished this in a week without his hard work and I am very grateful.
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actually one of them has wings. o__o
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Well there's going to a be a pair in the pile X)
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Sorry kills a strong word. Punch them would sound appropriate.
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I wish I could kill them if they were not women.
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Can i punch those two in the face....please..?
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Feel free. They've got it coming.
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K. Be right back. *walks into the comic and smacks them both* NO!! YOU DONT TREAT TWILIGHT LIKE THAT!! *goes over and hugs twilight*
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That is far better than my punch bowl solution. I approve!
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No still do it anyway, they deserve far worse...like cupcakes worse
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thank you!
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my sis's point is now proved from my last comment "PRESSURE"
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With Twilight struggling to cope with having everything and with Clutterstep struggling with having next to nothing, I knew right away that things will be set in motion as soon as they find each other. I've read everything so far and I have to say you are easily one of the best fancomic writers for MLP I've ever seen. I hope you make this a long one because short ones, as sweet as they are, have the tendency to make you want more and when you realize there isn't anymore, it leaves you depressed. Not sure you've had that feeling before, but I have. Especially with open ended endings to stories. They drive me nuts. Anyway, keep up the good work!
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social who need to be social i have a computer... and i can fly...
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One reason I like this for sure is how you have your OC be this guy with his flaws and doubts and all sorts of insanity going on. It makes me feel better about my own OCs since I really want to try to make them feel, well, human! XD With all their little flaws and imperfections and doubts.
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Top Reir, Peach Dream this is all i got to say. U BITCHES I HATE U NOW!
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efuda...
Women may be the less violent of the genders, but they sure are masters of mental terrorism. They know JUST the right things to say to shred you from the inside out. Poor Twily.
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I think you should give those two {BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!}
a mix of poison joke and a drink of Moonshine!
thatl teach em twi!
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It's the truth, Twilight won't have time for any friends or a social life due to being a princess. But...there is a change to make them change her back...
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but she is the princess of friendship
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But how can she be the Princess of Friendship if she doesn't have any friends? She'll watch them die of old age while she remains young.
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then she'll have to make new friends, like Celestia and Luna did, shes not the only one who will be missing somepony.i don't think shes immortal since Cadance and Twiligtht are artofficial alicorns but Celestia and Luna where born as alicorns so they are immortal but Cadance and Twilight aren't. sooo, problem solved
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But it is possible that Twilight and Candace are turned immortal against their will. Celestia managed because she became cold and harsh while Luna didn't so she put a spell on her sister to manipulate her into Nightmare Moon. Call this crazy but it is possible..
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thats silly, watch this: [link]
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Just because you read it doesn't make it the truth. It could be lies.
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Indeed.
No worries. Karma comes full swing in part 6.
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what bitches, though honestly
they represent all of the fandom that dissess on twi becoming a princess, because it's not their character instead who "deserves it so much more"
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As soon as possible if possible!
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I'm thinking the speech bubbles could have some light tint of a background colour, maybe related to the coats/manes of the respective speakers. This would help especially with the off-screen chatter. I know you've set a different font for the speakers, but even the plain white background is just a bit jarring and it wasn't as noticeable as it could've been.
As for your previous comics with the Clutterstep thought-bubbles, maybe that blue could be a bit much.
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I appreciate the feedback and I like the idea of colored word bubbles.
My only concern is that MLP settings are pretty colorful on their own. I don't know if losing the white of the bubbles would prevent them from being easy to read.
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I agree, and by the way, I hate those bitches
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Why is it that almost every royle pony is a jerk that tell you only bad this that are not all true and mess with you just to see you brake down.
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Every royal pony? As far as I know, Blueblood is the only rotten royal we've seen so far.
Heck, I created these two characters because I thought it a little unfair that out of 4 royals the only jerk was a male. Give us a non-jerk prince, dang it!
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