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MLP-Silver-Quill β A Princess' Tears - Part 3
Published: 2013-03-30 06:49:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 103914; Favourites: 764; Downloads: 320
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<=Part 2 | Story's Start | Part 4 =>I'd like to quote Louis CK here:
Women are non-violent, but they will s*** inside of your heart.
Needed to take some time to put the focus on Twilight and her first taste of hesitation. I don't believe that she'll have to leave Ponyville or say goodbye to her friends. That would end the show.
But I want to see her dealing with the idea of that outcome. It'd be great character growth and add some development to this new direction for the show. Will I get to see this come season 4? Well... only half a year to go!
Thanks once again to my faithful viewers, watchers, and commentators. And thanks to the folks at Derpibooru who surprised me by largely supporting this comic and offering some constructive feedback.
And extra special thanks to whose Canterlot at Night helped set the stage moving forward. I couldn't have finished this in a week without his hard work and I am very grateful.
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*Looks at second panel* Yes, but is she viable to the current meta.
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Oh wow. Something just struck me...
If the events of 'Crusaders of the Lost Mark' never happened, then we just met the grown-up Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara!
(Yes, I.K.,R. The coloring and the breeds are off, but the arrogance [pre-Season 5!!] is there!)
[*keys up walkie-talkie*]
>>observer to falcon, do you read? two less-than-noble targets identified. Sit-rep, falcon<<
: roger, falcon. awaiting target's street-side reveal.
: TT? P.Dream? YOU DONE GOOFED!!
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Twilight: "Ha, you two are sooo funny.....I think I'll have you executed tomorrow"
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Yes, this seems like something I would do...
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I oughta slap these two bitchs in the mouth for talking shit to Twilight
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and I give you two...5 seconds to run away or you'll be flying out the window.
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And the Award for "the shitt-Bitch" goes tooooooooo~
Top Tier and Peach Dream, the Pastel Bitches!!! You have to share the Award^^ (ill give them 2 Minuetes!)
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Twilight, their names are Bottom Tier and Poop Dream.
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Oooh now that was harsh, but they do have some points on things. Being a princess depend all the glam and fame isn't all about that it has duties and skills that test your abilities to get something done. Sure I think they were thinking a bit wrong on how long she would last, I mean she was Celestia's student for most of her life and study very hard in a school for gifted unicorns, they should have at least giving her a chance or positive feedback. Great work on their designs I love the colors and the shading and lip biting on Twilight just gives the scene a lot of emotion great work!
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Me: I know what to do! **Grabs Pinkamena**
Pinkamena: Have a cupcake you 2!
(2 days later)
Me: Done with the cupcakes?
Pinkamena: Yep! I gave them pay back for treating my friend like that! **Holds up cupcakes made from those 2 ponies.**
Me and Pinkamena: **Brohoof**
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*walks over and has flamthrower* o yeah those two will pay
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Women are non-violent, but they will s*** inside of your heart.
OH! LIKE MEN WONΒ΄T!
god I love this thing
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somebody please get me a needle an thread,no make that a KNIFE and thread,because these two deserve to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Β Β Β Β Β
(also does top tier remind anybody else of dolphin dreams/sea swirl?)
(idk which one is her cannon name,she is the backround pony with the dolphin cutie mark)
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I feel like I saw this page somewhere... Oh well. Sometimes I just get intense dΓ©jΓ vΓΉ, or sometimes even relive entire days. Oh well indeed.
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Assholes, don't listen to them Twilight you are amazing. Clutter will help you Twilight, don't worry.
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*Gasp* that bitch...*went inside the comics and give those 2 ponies a bitch slap and for my life before the guards catches me*... You will never take me alive cops adios.
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I feel a lot a hate coming for those twoπ‘ i want to finish those not nice pony ~yay~
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Haha, I like the quote. Sadly though, it's too often true.
Anyway, I think it's really like Twilight to worries about such things, she tends to stress out a lot when she's out of her comfort zone. And this big change in her life would most likely stress her out quite greatly. Those mares were just the "spark", Β I guess, to make her realize the possible meaning of this change.Β
So far, your comic is really well done, mostly in the story part. You brought believable ideas about some of the struggles ponies can go through.
(It looks like the mare in the background fell asleep while listening to fancy pants xD I guess poping out of nowhere after the second panel is quite tiring)
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I've got a whole spool of shiny green thread, basic embroidery skills, and 2 bitches mouths to sew shut, TIME TO GET A NEEDLE!
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First you get the power, then you get the bitches.
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Omg so mean!
Well you know what they say... B!tches get stitches and I've got a whole spindle!!!Β
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I'l get violent on their sorry carcasses if they mess with her!
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Wel someone had to bring Twilight back to reality, maybe not like this. Leave it to 2 brats to think they can talk to a princess like that. They seem to have forgotten their place( along with the rest of the nobles), that their power exists because Celestia lets it, and if all 3 princess's abolished, theres really nothing they can do about it.
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Top Teir and Peach Dream are going t othe moon.
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-Grabs Top Teir and and Dream Peach by their tails with magic- ALRIGHT, YOU TWO! YOUR OFF TO CANTERLOT PRISON!Β
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Not. Nice Ponies. I don't like them Β
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Oh. Is this going to be a Prince And The Popper story?
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...Is everyone below me an anti-Cadenzalookalikebgpony?
I could say that the way you handle Twilight's ascension to royalty is something we hope to see in season four too. But nevermind. 
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Oh, helloo, random mares! How does it feel not being on Friendship is Magic? Not even as background ponies?Β
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...*points at the to bitches* get those motherfuckers! *snipers blow them to bits, followed by thosands of army stuff* AND STAY DEAD!
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Back off, bitches, or you'll regret it.
That's not a threat. I couldn't do anything to you if I wanted to, anyway. It's a warning. You don't want to test what happens if her friends hear about this.
For that matter, if you get her to crack, you'll find you're nowhere near minimum safe distance. You're messing with the head of a pony who can level a town by accident.
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Is anyone gonna hold me back from freezing them and sending them to the moon to freeze for an eternity?
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AFSHCH&&&((&&&###!!DHGGBFHDHFHFHDH@$&?-::=RSDGJDH
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they're mean to twily???? HOW DARE THEY??? GRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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