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Published: 2016-03-09 14:43:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1065; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Unlike my usual art, I decided to try out something different.
I added more details to her hair, retained black edgelines and tried to avoid blending.
I also used some water color filter I found on Google!
What do you think? Feedback appreciated!
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Character(c)春原ロビンソン
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Comments: 23
Asa-Chi [2016-05-15 17:08:18 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! So cute <3
I love the effect the drawing has
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xxSoulsealerxx [2016-03-12 00:42:01 +0000 UTC]
Ah, good work as usual.
This style seems a bit more mature feel to it.
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YuriKittyYuriKitty [2016-03-10 07:54:59 +0000 UTC]
Found in the critique folder so >> I'm gonna try to make this one short since its pretty late rightnow.. First the hair, the shine you added makes the picture look really flat, you can play with how you can highlight the hair, and for the hair form
I feel like you couldve added more 'detail' or structure to it by sectioning out different seconds a bit better (?).
For the body > I don't know if your looking for a chibi style or not but that doesn't really matter honestly if you're serious about improving faster with art. To start off, you have tons of room to improve your body forms. You did well on how the clothes would form around the body however, it also shows me how much you can work on more in female figures~
To sum it up, you can work more on > Anatomy/ the human figure \o/ -along with hair-
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MMDAnimatio357 In reply to YuriKittyYuriKitty [2016-03-10 13:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for taking your time to give me feedback despite how late it is there! (*´ω`*)
I have a few questions though...
1. So for the highlights i guess I should just make it more round?
2.what do you mean by sectioning different seconds?
I'm actually got the knack of female body(kinda??) But I'm quite new to drawing younger people so I'm still confused im the difference of their body shape. Do you have any useful tutorials for it?
Thanks again!
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YuriKittyYuriKitty In reply to MMDAnimatio357 [2016-03-10 19:53:21 +0000 UTC]
1: Don't exactly think of it as a shape but more shape it with the texture of the hair, even anime/mangas do this.
2: Sectioning...looking back at it, I think it's cause the hair doesnt look soft (?)
Take this picture for example fav.me/d9k38p2
She/he made the hair look soft, and added shadows to the seperate 'sections' as in the different parts of the bangs, to make it pop up/look more real (?)
Same with the highlights, they didn't really use the color white, or a solid shape~
Useful tutorials : www.youtube.com/watch?v=eiKcI4… <<< thats for the basic adult female though.
Still, if you watch it you can get a better understanding, just make the body a bit smaller and -youngfemalesdont havetitsdeveloped yet s0..-
Another good YT'r who does helpful videos is Istebrak~
Gl, looking forward to some more works \o/.
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MMDAnimatio357 In reply to YuriKittyYuriKitty [2016-03-11 10:20:51 +0000 UTC]
1. ooh I see! I understand what you mean now.
2. Oh yes, I did state that I didn't blend anything so.. Thanks
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YuriKittyYuriKitty In reply to MMDAnimatio357 [2016-03-11 19:56:27 +0000 UTC]
Always welcome~
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FlamingDildo [2016-03-10 01:10:01 +0000 UTC]
Great work, Frühling. You are improving very quickly!
That tiny indication of her nipple though
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MMDAnimatio357 In reply to FlamingDildo [2016-03-10 07:15:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, mook! (*´ω`*)
consider it as a fanservice for you ewe //cough
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HangNgaLePhan [2016-03-09 14:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, bby! It's so beautiful!
This is the best drawing of yours in my opinion ~ >w<
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MMDAnimatio357 In reply to HangNgaLePhan [2016-03-09 15:05:15 +0000 UTC]
Awww!! Thank you!! ////
Glad you think so!
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