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Published: 2007-04-04 08:25:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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I know that I love you very muchI feel despair
I see you, I feel warmth in my heart
I feel pain
Why is this so?
I am cursed
Why did this happen?
I am hurt
In the distance a piano is played
My ears deaf
In the sky the sun is shinning
My eyes blind
When I found you, I thought happiness
So very sweet
When I held you, I felt love
So so bitter
The dream had just begun
Why is it?
The curse came with it
Why for us?
I'll find a way to be with you
Promise it is
I'll break a way the curse on me
Promise with me
Why do you fear?
Why do I tear?
Why are we cursed?
Why is this so?
Can it be so?
Can we be together?
No
Yes
Maybe
Who cares?!
Either way I'll fight
for you
Either way I'll die
for us
Please my love
fight with me
Please my friend
fight for us
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Comments: 5
loztheworm [2008-02-18 17:09:26 +0000 UTC]
somehow your words stand out to me in this poem..all the feelings left unsaid and the words people want to hear..theyre all here in this poem...your words have meaning to them i like this poem
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MMPR In reply to loztheworm [2008-02-22 04:34:39 +0000 UTC]
Well it was made with a very pure feeling of hopelessness as well as fighting spirit. Having a losing battle yet having the valor to keep going. Strangely the situation that gave birth to this poem has turned for the better thanks to thos final words: "fight for us." i'm glad you liked it.
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loztheworm In reply to MMPR [2008-02-22 16:43:33 +0000 UTC]
yeah its like if you look at it from a relationship point of you of someone who wants to fight but its like loosing a part of yourself...if that makes sense
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MMPR In reply to loztheworm [2008-02-27 01:33:29 +0000 UTC]
well yeah everything in the universe is balanced so obtaining something means up to a point losing something.
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