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" Twelve noon.A dog whined, shivering, on the front porch. The front door recognized the dog voice and opened. The dog, once huge and fleshy, but now gone to bone and covered with sores, moved in and though the house, tracking mud. Behind it whirred angry mice, angry at having to pick up mud, angry at inconvenience. For not a leaf fragment blew under the door but what the wall flipped open and the copper scrap rats flashed swiftly out. The offending dust, hair, or paper, seized in miniature steel jaws, was raced back to the burrow. There, down the tubes which fed into the cellar, it was dropped into the sighing vent of an incinerator which sat like evil Baal in a dark corner. The dog ran upstairs, hysterically yelping to each door, at least realizing, as the house realized, that only silence was there. It sniffed the air and scratched the kitchen door. Behind the door the stove was making pancakes which filled the house with a rich baked odor and the scent of maple syrup. The dog frothed at the mouth, lying at the door, sniffing, its eyes turned to fire. It ran wildly in circles, biting at its tail, spun in a frenzy, and died. It lay in the parlor for an hour.
Two o'clock sang a voice.
Delicately sensing decay at last, the regiments of mice hummed out as softly as blown gray leaves in an electrical wind.
Two-fifteen.
The dog was gone. In the cellar, the incinerator glowed suddenly and a whirl of sparks leaped up the chimney."
from "There Will Come Soft Rains"
by Ray Bradbury
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Artwork assembled in PhotoSuit4 and Adobe PhotoShop Elements, Aug 07 2010
Post-Apocalyptic Concept Copyrighted (C) by mmpratt99
Quote from "There Will Come Soft Rains" Copyrighted (C) by Ray Bradbury
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Comments: 32
Jakalhiver [2014-04-11 17:48:23 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
A picture is worth a thousand word (which you also supplied).
A very saturated tone. It can invoke feeling in another.
Excellent.
In terms of the story you so kindly provided, it appealed to the five senses in an accurate portait of your picture.
The red smog clouds are dense and would certainly give the impression it would be fairly difficult to breath and or smell.
You can see sustenance is scarce as the hound would implie.
The detail on the buildings was a good touch.
A creepy atmosphere blending well with the center.
Excellent.
p.s. Very good background
Keep up the good work.
Jack Al'hiver
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NuclearD00d [2010-08-17 04:29:36 +0000 UTC]
Hey, was bored and played around with this picture, would it be okay for me to upload it? XD
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mmpratt99 In reply to NuclearD00d [2010-08-17 04:44:24 +0000 UTC]
Is this going to be in dA or Photobucket?
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mmpratt99 In reply to NuclearD00d [2010-08-17 18:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you got a psychedelic effect going on there!
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NuclearD00d In reply to mmpratt99 [2010-08-17 05:29:37 +0000 UTC]
Deviant Art. If I had uploaded it to photobucket, you would be commenting on a link.
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pomohippie7 [2010-08-16 16:27:25 +0000 UTC]
Very cool. And the Ray Bradbury quote it very fitting.
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DoMo-DiSFunKTiOn [2010-08-15 17:55:20 +0000 UTC]
The picture is gorgeous and so is the story...Beautiful work
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mmpratt99 In reply to DoMo-DiSFunKTiOn [2010-08-15 19:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I felt sorry for the dog though.
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DoMo-DiSFunKTiOn In reply to mmpratt99 [2010-08-21 01:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Aww...yeah, same here
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Starscreamer07 [2010-08-10 04:35:19 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes, one of my favorite Bradbury books - the Martian Chronicles.
I'd say this story alone is what ultimately caught my attention and drew me into the post-apocalyptic world.
its a sobering story, yet hauntingly beautiful.
Much like your photo. kudos to you on a good job.
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mmpratt99 In reply to Starscreamer07 [2010-08-10 17:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I really felt sorry for the Martians in that book. They had a really refined and artistic civilization and then they nearly get completely wiped out by a measles virus brought by human invaders
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AmongTheFirst [2010-08-08 17:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Ray Bradbury is a great man. I greatly admire him
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mmpratt99 In reply to AmongTheFirst [2010-08-08 23:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Have you read Something Wicked This Way Comes?
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AmongTheFirst In reply to mmpratt99 [2010-08-09 22:12:49 +0000 UTC]
I've only heard of it. I'm more familiar with the Martian Chronicles and Fahrenheit 451
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mmpratt99 In reply to AmongTheFirst [2010-08-09 23:03:51 +0000 UTC]
Disney made a movie based on that work, it scared the crap out of me.
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mmpratt99 In reply to MatiasBloodbones [2010-08-08 23:53:15 +0000 UTC]
Not as evil as the people who trashed his home.
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mmpratt99 In reply to Wretched-Existence [2010-08-09 00:02:29 +0000 UTC]
I might even do a better version instead of just replacing my first one.
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Wretched-Existence In reply to mmpratt99 [2010-08-09 06:53:57 +0000 UTC]
the only thing wrong with it is the image quality, all you can see is pixels in this
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mmpratt99 In reply to Wretched-Existence [2010-08-09 23:23:42 +0000 UTC]
It's always these pixels that wreak the work.
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